I am sorry that i need to give such a low evaluation. I tried to read it, but my head srarted hurting while reading the first two chapter.I read novels for entertainment and to build a world in my mind while reading these stories. if i want to immerse myself into the story, it needs to have a basic level of grammar and story telling quality.I also read comments about this grammar problem and that it gets better with the chapter as the story develops. But i needed to stop reading, because my head could not take it.If possible could you please rewrite the beginning, so that it reflects the real quality of the world you build.I would really appreciate it and hope your stories get traction and your writing improves by leaps and bounds
Compared to a gem like Godly Stay-home dad and a Stay-home Dad's restaurant in an alternate world really insults novels using this plot. I'd recommend those two stories of you liked this and want a good and worthwhile read while I would question your taste. All the same, question is questioning, it's not telling you how to live your life.
Reading the reviews, I became extremely curious. A feel good novel with nice characters? Was this even a Chinese novel!? Reading it, I have to say, everyone is correct! This is not your typical Chinese novel. Instead of having arrogant young masters, people bullying the lesser off protagonist, or face slapping, it is instead a sweet and fluffy novel where the main character is optimistic and hard working, and is helped by the side characters, who are all friendly and supportive! It's a breath of fresh air and very enjoyable. I hope that this will quickly be chosen to enter the voting pool, it's definitely worth continuing to read as long as it continues down this path!
I really love this book, it is one of my most favourite books ever.
Seemed interesting at first but its poorly written/translated ****, the writing doesn't hold a candle to the similar science fiction mechanic novel
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The story has very nice kingdom building plots. Just the grammar makes it kind of unreadable. Still, I rate this novel 5 star cause i am used to machine translations and bad grammar cant do anything to me (*Evil Laughter*). Thank you very much author for this wonderful novel.
Really appreciate it and I liked the character of Roddy so much he is amazingly scared of snakes and other things. Boone is also nice character I wish more twist and turns in it
This book is really nice . Charecters growth Is intresting. I would love to see more of these book .story is intresting and storyline progress is good
This is a very great story The foreshadowing things are really awesome I mean there is really a need for this kind of army Kingdom world building otherworldly awesome books . what the **** is wrong with you over webnovel this is a book you must release at any fucking cost
Other than some gramatical the story is reallY good. It dates back to the han dynasty and shows how the mc even though he is royalty hes still sticking with his roots of being a gang boss but Still playing on both sides. If you enjoy a cold hearted But smart mc this Is a must read
Writing quality is pretty okay. Updates are stable. The story has a decent pace and isn't a 70 chapter tournament arc thing. The Mc has a okay development but it doesn't get described that much. The world is, till now, a pretty average cultivation world. The author could read more paragraph comments and fix his mistakes that are pointed out.