Nice book when will be the next chapter release?looking forward? to more awesome chapters from the same author of my favorite lohp? I just hope it will be sooner than we expected.....?
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To fellows like me who hate generic copy paste trashs with passion, you're gonna love this one. The quality and translation is superb.MC is a calm and collected fellow vastly different from the generic hot blooded, loud and obnoxious guys who think with their penis.Everything is described vivily. You will feel absorbed into the story and experience it like it's happening just right around you.Since this is not an easy to translate generic copy pasta trash, knowing web-novel, I don't dare hope for it to be picked up. If it does picked up, that's nice. If it doesn't .. well that's fine too.
I read the whole novel and it is a good read! If you're looking for a novel that makes you feel (very) special and get the chills right from the start, this novel may not be for you. The MC eventually becomes an immortal but starts off as a mortal. If you like yoinking all the goodies though, this novel is definitely for you.
It's identical to another novel, "Digging to Survive: I can see Hints." This is just a crappier version of that novel. I'm not kidding they are almost identical. I'm not sure who copied who but I want to say this one did considering it's an all around worse version from what I've read thus far. Both novels involve a system that helps the main character in a crypt / underground world find items and allies. They have to dig to other crypts to obtain items and fight enemies. You get the idea.
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t wait tell the next chapters come out soon so I’ll be able to read it so please write the next chapters soon thanks
If you have an insane amount of dedication, free time, and willpower, then the advice given in the early chapters will be immensely helpful to you.If you strive to write a poorly written, generic Chinese cultivation novel of the sort, this guide is perfect for you.All in all, this has some decent advice on basic writing strategies that absolute beginners or bad writers may need to hear. It's clearly formed around the strategy of appealing to the masses with a formulaic, and generic story based around wish-fulfillment however. This guide is absolutely not for everyone, nor should it be taken as solid advice on writing a "good" story.There was an error in punctuation on the very first line of this book, not sentence, line. In a book made to teach people about writing...
The book definitely had potential. Interesting video game plot. The author may not have had as much experience playing as writing. Several time he used the wrong attributes for a primarily dexterity based class. Damage scaling based on strength when using a crossbow was particularly bad. What made me ultimately drop the book is when the MC tied up a female enemy, sexually assaulted her, and threatened to rape her. Seriously?! Sorry, I refuse to read a book with an evil MC. Standards matter. Morals matter. Hopefully I can check out your future work.
The premise of this story is halfway decent, the author had some interesting ideas and tried to pull an interesting spin on an old genre.The major problem with this novel is that the author utterly fails to express emotions in a convincing way. The MC feels wooden and constructed because he has either too much emotions or none at all. Side-Characters are a lot better, but not really relevant due to the premise of this story.World building is okay-is, not good, but vague enough to be believable. Differences in planets are almost nonexistent, but again, this isn't a slice of life or exploration type of story. Pasing is another problem, we either get way to much information about things we don't need to care about at all, or not enough to really imagine what is going on.
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It was really good for the first 40 chapters, but literally chapter 41 the Nationalism skyrocketed and become solely about how China can handle anything while other countries will fall. It literally says that Mein Country (America) is the strongest country in the world, but is struggling to hold the enemies back. All while China could easily handle 3 times more than them, all because they have a longer history.You can't claim one country to be the strongest, then suddenly claim another country could easily have 3 times more than even the strongest country.
Honest reviews are here..[Spoiler Alert]It is a story about MC who transmigrated into a body that was untalented as a normal person, and then, he got his golden finger, "the system.." This is a typical Wuxia novel where the character here easily offended, the sudden interference of young master who want to kill MC without a reason, and bla bla bla..You would see around Ch.3, MC cultivation iump from 1st major realm into the 8th major realm right away..1. The Physical Body realm (Ch.1)2. The Dragon-Elephant realm3. The Divine Treasure realm4. The Sea of Bitterness realm5. The Wheel of Life realm6. The Dao Palace realm7. The Paramita realm8. The Divine Transformation realm (Ch.3)9. The Heavenly realm (Ch.90+)10. Origin Return realm11. Tribulation Tanscendence realm12. Mahayana realm13. Deva realm14. Myth realm15. Grotto-Heaven realm16. Innate Sky Realm17. Heavenly Cycle realm......[Unverified realm] :??. Great Emperor realm??. Heaven Emperor realm??. True God realm??. True Celestial realm??. Celestial King realm??. Immortal Emperor realmThe author only list out ONCE, and if you don't remember which realm is higher and how high the rank is, you would be confused when reading it.. The cultivation name is quite unique and different from others' wuxia or xianxia type of novel, which makes it harder to remember..When you see MC jump into the 8th major realm right away, you might think this MC has a fast-paced growth progress, but it is not.. MC slowly increases the cultivation level. He rises one minor realm at a time and no longer has a huge jump cultivation rank.. For example, at Ch.100, MC is still at 9th major realm.. Yes, he only increased one major realm after 100 chapters..For the 1st 50 chapters (Ch.4 - Ch.50+), all MC enemy or opponents have lower realms than himself.. Mostly, at 5th or 6th major realm and some are 7th major realm and only a few at 8th major realm, same as MC..After Ch.50, MC goes to a greater world (temporarily) where he can see how weak and low his cultivation is.. Then, after returning back, he started to meet a powerhouse who was a lot stronger than him (13th or 14th major realm)..There is a huge major realm difference between MC and his opponent.. MC is also getting more and more arrogant as the story progresses.. MC talent is really pathetic.. He is at 8th major realm, and he has a friend who is at 9th major realm.. After a few months, MC is still at the 8th major realm (MC only increases one minor realm :early, middle, late, peak, prefection) while his friend is at 11th major realm (increase 2 major realm)..There are many regions in this world, and MC regions are the weakest.. Many MC opponents also have much much much higher realm than him.. And by slowly increasing the minor realm one at the time, kinda make it look boring and is the reason I stopped reading..MC system is quite strong, but he needs to pay the appropriate price to use the system.. If MC gets 300k Fate Point (FP), the system will ask for 250k FP.. If he gets 1 million FP, the system will ask for 1 million FP.. If MC gets 100 million FP, the system will ask for 70 million FP.. So basically, the author would let MC have too much point..I also don't like how the author makes MC behaviour look like.. Sometimes, MC acts like a stupid person.. He only has one plan, and if it fails, that's it.. He can only hope for best.. Then, some people try to sell exorbitantly to MC, which is 100k middle divine stone for a corpse, and he agrees without any care..Sometimes, MC left his enemy running away so his enemy could bring more people for MC to kill (MC wants more corpse).. The things got from sacrifices the corpse is random.. It can be treasure, fate point, years of cultivation, pills, weapons, techniques, skills, and so on.. And mostly, MC gets weapons.. It is very rare that the MC gets anything that will increase his cultivation level..And the story got more and more absurd and ridiculous.. The math does not make sense. The cultivation level does not make sense. The behaviour of this novel character does not make sense, and a lot more.. I stopped reading after reaching around Ch.300++..