The story has a lot of potential but the bad grammar ruins it,I can understand the fact that english is not your main language but you can have someone proofread and fix your work if possible.
The story has it interesting elements to it so far with the chapters posted and do hope for it to grow into a popular book one day int the contest.so author my friend keep up the work and don't give up on the story you hear me.
The premis is great but there is too much unnecessary information. Almost a thousand chapters but the story hasn’t even broken two weeks. The chapters are short and honestly most of the time you’re going to get anywhere. The story has great potential and I’m going to continue reading, but yeah.
I can't believe this is the first novel the author has written. Its the best novel I read till now.
THIS BOOK IS NOT A 5 STAR!!!!!!!! DON’T EVEN BOTHER TO START READING IT CAUSE THERE’S NO DAMN ENDING, THIS STUPID AUTHOR IS BEEN GIVING US 1 LOUSY CHAPTER A DAY AND THE STORY IS BEEN DRAGGING OUT FOR OVER A YEAR NOW, YES ITS BEEN OVER A FCKN YEAR NOW!!!!!!!!! DON’T WASTE YOUR TIME AND MONEY!!!!!
are you planning on making it as a series it's a fantastic book worth every penny.... you have amazing writing skills.....
the stories are very interesting but it is very costly the bonus is low
Really enjoyed the book and story line, I would definitely be a 5 star book but it’s in major need of auto corrections and spelling as the wording was incorrect through out the story. Other than that overall the book was definitely enjoy.
Alpha Gray is so dominant and I love it
nice story thanks
Violence against Wome*. Be warned. violen*t story thru 1st 20 chapters. S*x assa*lt LOTS s*x ab*se and RA*E. Very dark. story would be ok without. just missing suic*de to round out dark evil storyline
This book is a definite must read! It will take you to a whole new world of friendship, love and happiness. A++++