and a ff more or less in my opinion the beginning is a little more promising plus the 'level of power' and very strange the MC has several classes and can absorb the power of others but he is always weaker than the others and strange
Wow, with just only 4 chapters and your novel has already hooked me. Lemme give some stars. Keep up with the works bro. With high regards and respect.
Starts off not as great, lots of repeated wuxia elements, but gets better later on ..................????????????????????
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Horrible story boosted by its author, the author literally just spammed a bunch of five star reviews. Save yourself the tears and suffering and just skip this novel.
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I have to say. in just 3 chapters I was hooked. After reading all 10 I'm obsessed. please please please come back to this story. I didn't know I needed this in my life but now I'm in love with the story.
the story has an interesting premise however as you read on the story line gets jumbled and things get mentioned out of no where and then never again. It feels like a story the author has lost interest in and forgetting past progression. the writing is still better than an mtl
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Feels like the writer was going through something while writing this. Most plot points don’t make sense and there is a lack of explanation. The poor grammar and mixing up of names does not help either. I’ve decided to drop at chapter 14 after checking the reviews on the story (wish I had done that earlier). Final thoughts: The story is quite intriguing so far but the grammar and number of mistakes is just way too unbearable. Don’t recommend to others
There is way too much cringe.... sorry but it hurt just to read it at this point... I would say to tone down on the main character and his/her overall personality, but maybe I just don’t like it....