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“Good, good, good!” I snort in derision. “If you lock away this novel and do not release chapters, do not blame me for being ruthless.”With the flick of my sleeves, Webnovel’s revenue was reduced to ashes.
as a brand new story that I have read on here, it has really caught my interest. I've only read a few chapters and I look forward to maybe read more.
I applaud the author for the way he has written this. It grabbed and dragged me (kicking and screaming) to the next chapter. Please continue!
I'm not done reading the entire chapters but I must say I love your choice of words.The saying '18-year-old child and 9-year-old adult' is so comical.The characters are built up very well that we got to see their addictions in the first chapter.Nice book author.
I feel like this story was doing really well then in 3 chapters went from the character actually developing in a good direction to him being yeeted back in to being a puss boy. Don’t really know how to feel about that
Typical reincarnation system novel except with zombies and evolutions instead of cultivation. Overall, the writing has tons of mistakes even 70 chapters in and constantly distracts you from the story. Next, Im assuming the author isnt a native english speaker so they use different terms for cities, towns, etc. and gets very confusing. The author also repeats a lot of info and sometimes incorrectly which can lead to confusion also. So if you like it, read it if you want but i put my piece here.
slow updates and chapters too short, other than that a good concept but the characters feel too unnatural like in this 2 last chapters the "Boss" accepted the "SYSTEM" way too easily (I'M NOT NATIVE ENGLISH SPEAKER SO PLEASE PARDON MY MISTAKES)
The story is amazing, the characters are unique - we have the devil, witches, elves, shapeshifters and many more. Everyone is different and brings new things to the story. I fell in love with that book ??and I can’t stop reading. It took me into the world of magic, supernatural, unique things and divine powers ....... You will be fascinated by beautiful descriptions, characters and unpredictable events. This amazing story will draw you into every chapter and make you longing for more…… ❤️❤️❤️
I really want to like the novel, but story has one huge problem. Arman. I have read till c100 and after they leave the first island, story slowly starts to convert into Arman's story, especially after they leave for human lands.After they arrive to the city mc basically becomes nothing more than side character, we follow Arman's stupid and annoying shenanigans, Arman is one doing the talking, Arman is one starting the fights.Mc's role on other hand is pretty much to stay in background, pay, guard and be an nanny for Armand. Mc really only gets some time on the story when there are enough problems and he much come in to clean the mess. Idk, I just expected story to be about mc, not Arman. Besides, Arman is constructed like stereotypical "comedy" side kick, comedy meaning he's just super annoying.
overall a very good novel although it had a rush ending ......................................................................................................................................................
Seems like it’ll be yandere, immediate 5 stars(-1 cause of the terrible TL quality recently), just praying it doesn’t randomly get westernised somewhere along the line