Hey author i know you treasure this book. But read my review before deleted this comment.First. Everything is rushed. How did 'lucky know thay the mc had a limiter:? It wasn't even mentioned anywhere. And Lucy has killing intent from nowhere. Care to explain not here but in the story.Sceond you are' trying' to get the element of mystery or surprise but you unable to do it.Third the mc has an 'AI' that can look in to the character's weakness. Don't you think that you have added and AI and then the heir of death. A bit to much... The story os great however the turns of events as well the quality is top notch. However, here is an advice. If the first 10 chapters are great then the readers will care to get the money out of their pockets. So please. Make the story much for understand able. What you are doing is writing your thoughts and ideas that you want or thought in your story that you want it to be there immediately. YOU KNOW THEBPLOT AND WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT. BUT WE DON'T. Ask a person to read your story without knowing the plot and you will understand how a reader like me suffers from trying to imagine how mc has AI in his head. Give some details about.
I'm sorry to say but the translation is questionable at best, the story is very mainstream and rather boring...and I just made it through a few chapters until I decided to protect my sanity and drop it. So many stupid moments that you can't even blame on the translation."My pet grows when it eats electricity. So I will feed it wires!" - no, not plugged in. just...wires. Because obviously electricity magically manifests it wires.Just... don't. A Pokemon Fanfic is probably more sensible, at least that needs no questionable worldbuilding...
10/10 I want to spank Murakami in the as* now, lol......Peace out mate, i'm just kiddingDefinitely worth to read, very very good i'd say, lolFellow Authors are awesome people
