It was pretty decent, up till chapter 40. The translation quality gets significantly worse from chapter 41 onwards.
I don't usually write reviews because I don't know how to make one and have bad grammar, so I'll just write my opinion.I like the story and the MC, he's pretty unique on a different way. The story is quite slow phased but I like it that why, it makes the world building more detailed. You might sometimes be annoyed at the MC because he's not using his brain sometimes and a little bit childish, well for me it one of his good points, it made him different from the other MCs with edgy personality.This novel is definitely a gem, I can't wait it to be popular so it can have stable update and many chapters.Btw Author Luv U~♪
Webnovel is on their A-Game this time, I mean two decent novels at once that’s unheard of.
It's a shame, the missions have punishments for failing, it doesn't matter how serious or light the punishment is at the moment there is a punishment you become a slave of the system, I don't care if it never fails or whatever, I'm out
this novel is very good from the plot to the world building and design of characters. I particularly like mc's personality who is a psychopath because of what his family in his previous life had done to him. the writing quality is top notch too. even if the mc is op , he is not too op either and the story develop well too.I hope you'll continue writing this great book
Oke needless to say authours work are topnotch. Love the story and the development is acceptabl. Grammar and english is flawless to me. Story is lit. Give it a read yourself posting this review without spoilers so yea??
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This novel is criminally underrated, It is truly tragic a lot of trash novels occupy the top 200 leaderboards but that's Webnovel. I enjoy everything from the macho mc to the fact that he isn't afraid to show off his own achievements.
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Wow! What an amazing novel. Keep it up! I especially like your style, but your storytelling is also very nice! I am waiting for the next story!
historia interesante sin el tipico trama, aunque aparte del prota veo casi todos los personajes vacios y la verdad leyendo tu otra novela encuentro que podria ser mejor, no deja del todo insatisfecho, pero si me gustaria saber si esto tendra +18 ademas ******o ? tambien me gustaria si pudieras un poco mas del desarollo mundial pues dices cosas muy vagas en si pd seria genial si agregaras mas historia aunque sea a la madre pues solo sabemos que existe y aparte de unos pocos dialogos no sabemos nada mas :c