Guilty_Yuns
This is something I would read any day.The plot looks promising and the system seems a tad bit unique from the normal ones. Furthermore the quality of the chapter is next level, the author makes almost negligible errors making this a fun to read book.
Things i expect in the future:
Character Development
Consistent Updates
Consistent Quality of chapter
Wish you all the best for the future chapters Author-san
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Another shame for this app, so much trash novel that can pass the trial but when a good novel shows everyone ignores this the same thing that happend with midnight bookstore, shameeee
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I hope that author could explain well the reason behind every choices and actions that the mc made withouth spilling too much and ruining the course of the story. So far i love this book hopefully the quality increase or at least stay stable.
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on the first chapter...there are some mistakes in punctuation that causes confusion in understanding the sentences .. however the story seems to be promising....so I'll give 5 stars (◕ᴗ◕✿)
This story started out great but after the first 40 chapters it becomes an IQ reducing waste of time. The protagonist is the weakest and most indecisive character in the book! He makes all the wrong decisions and falls for the same trick more than three times. He doesn't think rationally and the only time he takes action is the go on rampage AFTER his girlfriend has already been hurt.
This is a good story, waiting for your next updates ?
Greetings, my fellow cultured ladies and gentlemen. If you have read this book in the past but then dropped it for whatever reason, this review is for you. Minor spoilers ahead! Beware.After taking feedback from readers and editors alike, I have went back and edited a lot of the previous storyline (e.g. bringing the huntress along, MC making 'mistakes' despite his years of experience) to make it more realistic and fitting of the MC's character. I sincerely recommend giving this book another try, as I have fixed many of the previous inconsistencies.Thank you to everyone who does give this book another shot, and I hope you all have an awesome day. :)
It started with many plot holes and he says mc is 1000 years old mentally ,but does not act like one. he's just another otaku ,dumb, neet protagonist. And there were many this ignored in the starting of novel. A good start is only required to decide if I should continue. I know many will not agree.
I liked how the author brought the hindu mythology aspect to the story and the pace is pretty good. could have been more descriptive so the readers could get more immersed in the story. looking forward for more chapters!
