Fairly mediocre read. Nothing that's offensively bad, though also nothing special, creative or particularly good.
The writing quality is "so-so". For starters, there is plenty of simple spelling mistakes. I personally don't really mind, though still somewhat annoying.
What's more annoying, is the occasional grammatical error. Also nothing too bad or too frequent. It's still there though.
The thing that annoys me most about the writing quality, is the really simply and at times clumsily written sentences. A lot of simple word usage and simple sentences and the prose at times doesn't really flow too well.
Update stability is fine.
Story is fairly generic though interesting enough to keep most people reading.
Characters in this novel are one of it's other downfalls. They are all fairly two-dimensional. There just isn't much too them. What you see is what you get.
There is also plenty of weird logic leaps all over the place, which make the characters feels more like NPCs, than like actual characters.
Big 'meh' for me. If this was done well, this novel would have been so much better.
The world is okay. Some thing are pretty interesting, while others are straight ripped out of any generic anime.
The world is also pretty childishly put together. The reasoning and motivations for the way things are the way they are, only make sense if you don't really think about them.
Could overall be a decent read if you haven't read many novels like this and aren't bothered too much by the occasional writing issues and the childish portrayal of the world and characters. If you're looking for real quality and/or creative, look elsewhere.
Stick to english if you're translating a novel what's with the wacky Chinese characters in between every english line really stops you from immersing yourself into the novel
From what I’ve seen in sixty chapters, this could be a gem. It feels like there just the right amount of humanity in the main character mixed with just the right amount of psychopath. I’d really like for this to be updated more. It was a fun read.
Just reading the synopsis - 7 chapters a week (webnovel says 3).
Guy die-revives decides to play a game. (OK. Why? Makes no sence.)
Has a female lead tag, says a female character gonna appear later.. What? When? A single sentence would be enough. Or is is gonna reveal all the deepness?
You gotta give more credit to the guy actually made your cover not just put his name in between a bunch of plain text, almost got it missed.
Somewhat put a patreon link in there, with "addition to the story"? Not even going to comment on this.
Worst of all - gonna delete undesired reviews because it is a "premium" novel. Whatever that means. If it is the webnovel's definition about "premium" it is nothing to be proud of.. Something else.. Then wow.
I've seen people doing this "non constructive comments removal". It's just the worst possible function on here. Not all five star novels are good.
Got this featured on log page. Might read/might not. If the novel's quality is the same as its description, better not.
Best of constructive I could.
Now that it's been a year I'm honestly quite sad that only 26 chapters has been written. Time flies when you're bored. Anyways I just wanted to say that I spent some money (I totally didn't cry) and bought grammarly premium and some apps along with a bunch of writing utensils which will greatly increase the quality of my work. Although the release rate is still quite low since I have a life to live and homework to burn, I still try and write when I have enough motivation (I've been banned from red bull because I'm in puberty and I can no longer fly) Special thanks to Tam123 And our MHA friend Deku for following me all the way to chapter 26 already. I'm really glad. Now that I'm back in London I just have to finish a quick chess tournament and I will start releasing again. Well, enough of this 140 character+ review and time to start writing!
The story is amazing I'll give you five star. I hope you continue writing. 140 words 140 words 140 words 140 words 140 words 140 words 140 words 140 words
Very detailed. Good characters. In excited to see where this book is going to go. I can already tell that the author has plans for the plot.
Author here.✌ I just want to thank all you for reading my novel. Really thanks to everyone who votes and comment as it helpss me a lot!❤ English is not my mother tongue, so I hope you will forgive me for my grammatical errors and misuse of words sometimes.
It's a funny and light read. It's an interesting story and would be great if the mc wasn't dumb af... I mean his first technique the FOUNDATION breathing technique. He never even thinks to level it up and only levels up auxiliary passives. It's a joke rly and just so fcking frustrating to read. I could understand why he only levelled up his strengthen passive first even if it was annoying you understand because of the comp. However, after that was over and him having tons of points from it, the first thing he should have done is strengthen his foundation.... It's just so fcking frustrating to read So yeah...
Book one was fantastic! I can’t wait to see how our gifted main character and his beloved companions develop and conquer this new realm. Every character deserves attention and I love how much care the author takes in their personal development even though they might not be the main character.
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