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Jesus, this is a masterpiece hidden in the shadows. The writing quality simply shows the reader how much effort the author put into this story. The plot is generic, but coupled with the authors amazing way of description, amazing world building, and amazing, likeable characters, the generic plot starts slowly exiting your mind as you continue to read this amazing story. The only downside to this hidden gem, is that there are currently only 42 chapters. What are you still doing here reading my review? Go read it already!
Its pretty good, the grammars good, the characters are good but can be totally improved, although I know the characters are like that because this is like a fast overview, so its okay. The writing style is okay and can be improved. Overall it's a pretty good story. It's not confusing at least so that's a plus ?
If you get over the first few chapters, then you would be able to read a very interesting novel. Going to skip the awfulness of the first few chapters to not discourage people from trying to read this novel. Just know that MC is going to be like the "True hidden boss" and he would have to search for disciples and turn them to be a villain boss. For me the main interest in this story is definitely going to the disciples. Their story, progress, and future is what kept me excited. Didn't care much for MC right now since all he's really doing is keep on looking for disciples, waiting for new templates, and hiding his secret identity to his sister.Would really recommend people to read this book and hopefully goes through the trial read to voting pool, since this is a really interesting novel.
I've read up to chapter 16 and it's a good novel but just not the type I would like. The mc is cold and calculating. He can basically see people's desires and gets points by fulfilling them. He can use the points to get random items from a lottery. It's also a harem novel because he uses his power to sleep with women but that doesn't bother me as much I guess since there are no real feelings involved (if that makes sense). Overall meh but interesting concept.
I think this novel is pretty good... but for some like me who isn't using English as primary language or some who is not good at English. Maybe this is not your taste. I like novels who are always straight to the point and does not have a roundabout or using deep words as narrating a story... I've only read till chapter 3 and my head hurts. But, this novel I think has a good story based on the other reviews!
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It wasnt bad but after around chapter 45ish some flaws popped up. The MC willingly accepts being used by the sanctuary to clean up THEIR problems even after they hid critical information from him. He even said himself he didn't expect to get anything after dealing with a threat no one else can deal with. The fact the mc is okay with being used like this is beyond me.
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Develop your own opinions by reading past 10 chapters minimum. This is a homage to the novel that many of you have likely already read. Do I even need to explain?Don't judge this webnovel by the first three reviews you saw who probably didn't even get past chapter 3.I've read this novel up to chapter 30(the current latest translated chapter) and I want to see it continue.