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Honest score : 2/5
Tl;dr MC is the biggest cowatd in the entire galaxy. World was good, characters were good, story was somewhar going somwhere but right when we focus back on MC inside the civilization everything becomes meaningless.
Honestly the start was boring then it got good when I read some character development specially on MC side where he was supposedly becoming more of a veteran and bloodthirsty as he could awaken his memories; however after that, after the fight in the wood where he finally acted more like a man fighting against a wolf that almost got his arm; I had kept on reading further but it is just so damn bleak.
The MC turns back to the biggest coward on planet Earth you’ll ever see, even after a spike up on his cultivation after a war expedition around chapter 200s~ where at one point he mentioned he won’t hide anymore because supposedly he’s become OP; during an interuniversity tornament you notice he has not changed one damn bit.
Somehow he can have good fights when it is against monster and all then when it is against students he only knows how to hide, doesn’t have his supposedly veteran aura anymore that he has against beast. To be clear at this point I cannot be sure anymore if it is whether he is just truly that big of a wuss or he is going back on his words about not needing to hide his strenght because he also needs ressources.
I am starting to understand this less and less as I read on because somehow the character develpment he had just gets nullified, at least that is how it feels to me as he awaken more and more of his veteran memories and skills, not only he seems to be weaker but more importantly incomparably timid.
And it was clearly mentioned in the story at one point, the city and its organizations are seeking continuously promising youth to nurture and there isn’t even a clear explanation on why he has to hide his strenght as such while many others are just so open about it.
It’s often read in the novel’s words how of a hero not afraid of pain he is but this MC is just a damn coward that cannot fight like omg I’m running out of words on clearly how embarassing it is when you have just read how awesome he is against some beasts in the forests then once back in the civilization he gets thrashed by some random university youth because supposedly he isn’t using the fighting style he prefers, which is to hide, like when did he had to when it was against the beasts though ??
And also how is he somehow able to promote the ultimate style while doing as he does ? For some reason you read spectators comment about how good what he did was, I mean thank god for these comments because without them I truly would have been able to comprehend in what way what he did was different than how others did or that it was meaningful in any way and of course the system counting it as a win (successful promotion) is beyond me.
I am only so angry because the world building was good, the characters were good too but the MC himself is such a massive pain that I would have prefered to read the life of any secondary character in this novel; the novel wasn’t ruined by anything else but the protagonist itself, it makes me so angry.
Translation quality, update stability 5 stars
Story development 2 stars
Character design 1 star
World background 4 stars
Overall 3.4
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really awesome book, I like his powers, his system, his will to improve.
character development is awesome.
ONLY thing I don't like is Alex ( and the whole mystery behind her )
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I am not sure If I am following up with this story. It's very dark and trouble is popping up everywhere the mc goes. The MC don't even have chance to power up, but he is against 4-5th rank mage, odd with his family. Overall, it's a good story, but too dark for me. Good luck author.
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I got interested in the description however this story is rly not a good read.
Practical nothing has happened yet even with how far we are in. Everything so far is filler...
I don't mind the mc in the wheelchair as I feel it's different, something I like. However, my main problem is there is just WAY too many restrictions on the mc. He is helping EVERYONE get stronger while he is the weakest sht there is.
I mean he is helping random-ass ppl become strong before himself and his family. Yes, it's selfish but this is a dog eat dog world. Why is he helping people who can then kill him? It makes no sense. Plus with him being weak af... (weaker than a child)
If he increased his own strength and the people around him (his fam) so that they are the strongest then I don't mind him helping others. However, helping others to then potentially kill your family and himself is just too far.
Plus let's not forget he is a slave to the system following its every whim. Oh yeah, and he is meant to be a program designer so you expect some intelligence from the mc but nope... he's stupid.
Generic and lacking character. Two advantages of game novels are the option for creative world design and the option to have characters fail or die with limited consequences. Instead we got a generic fantasy world where his "talent" (a system that would never work IRL due to the imbalance caused) removes any sense of tension by giving him a ridiculous equipment, levelling and skill advantage over any other player. It's really cringy to have the MC called a "great god" for winning a lottery and the antagonists obviously went to How to be an Arrogant Young Master 101. At least in the first 30 chapters, MC has no real character of note (no relationships, quirks, personality), instead just following the rather dull plot line no questions asked. Overall, story is readable but very generic.
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