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I'm out....
Hi, may I ask your permission to translate this novel into Russian language in Wattpad?Thank you.
Well can't he create a card similar to the meat extraction card which produces and extracts silver milk powder from the blood of the girl to mass produce it
JUST READ IT
Honestly, it is hard for me to even rate it this highly. The english, grammar, and writing quality itself is subpar. The author really needs another person to go over his work. Its so bad it feels like a draft instead of the final work. The setting changes on a wim and the author seems to forget to tell us some info so we find it later. Almost seems like he is making it up as he goes. Its worse with the skills that are just deplorable how thought out and how badly it is used. None of the skills show proficiency, none of the monsters have a name other than monster until the author feels like it. Then there is the point of messed up names for the classes. The author seems to alive that the mcs class is something like a middle ground for supporters like a sorcerer or something but calls it a magician then another student has the magician class that isn’t support. The f is going on with the classes. Then u can just forget understanding the dialogue between characters bc the authors grammar fails to even explain what’ going on. Basically it is a novel that has an interesting concept that falls short on even the grammar much less the forced plot, and forced characters that are one dimensional ina way I thought wasn’t possible. Then there is the lack of world building that just limits the story even more.
could be much better if the writer makes less mistakes in writing as a reader would find it hard to read due to lack of punctuation..
This is a really good read I love reading about video games but this one is definitely of quality
If you want a troll MC then this is a must read series
If you want a laugh and you like MCs like the one from Senior Brother or No 1 Founder but more playful and with less common sense then this series is for you
Please read it if you need a laugh
Also...Translator! Please update 2 chaps a day
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I’m at chapter 50, and for me, it was detailed, or should i say ’overly detailed’ to the point that even an unimportant scene could take up half a chapter or more… And because of how detailed it is, chapters are quite often being repeated from different perspective, or a particular topic for that matter.
All in all, I liked details in my stories, since those small details can really bring a story to life, but this novel add it a little TOO MUCH it felt quite repetitive and VERY slow-paced.
Thanks for the story its amazing, first time i read about book of contract i tho it will be same as Long Live summons. It seems not but i do enjoy your work can't wait to finish it
