NahIdwin89
I'm still not done with the story but I will continue my reading later. A good and unique story. The plot is very captivating and the writing quality is also good with detailed description. The story development is also good. Not too fast nor not too slow.Author gave a good description regarding the world background making readers like me easy to imagine things.Nice work author.
is it possible for you to restart this novel again actually i had high expectation from this novel the way you started it but everything crumble when you stopped this novel 10 months ago
Okay here is my review ...Wrting quality is okay not perfect has not too many flaws and very readable. As for Story Development... Not too many chapters as of now but I'm liking it's development for now for Character Design now is not your best MC and is actually laid back and down to earth Updating is Fast maybe 2 chapters every other day and for the World Background is not your typical Info dump every action the MC takes over all VERY GOOD definitely will continue reading and waiting for new chapters..
I can't give the best review since there are only a few chapters, but so far, I love this story. I saw a few grammatical mistakes so that's good. I like the characters however I hope they can be a bit more fleshed out through the story. I can't say much about the world background since it's not fully explained. However, this is a great story and I can't wait for more!
I have been a good friend for a few days now and I have been trying to get hold on the wings of the hall opened again and the music I have been having to change it to the wrong location as I am now having a few issues to get back to you on the phone with my phone and the music more I will be able to use the phone or the device you want me on the phone
A beautiful book . Quite a different concept .Great going author . Really loved the book . ❤️?. Keep up the good work and give us more stories like this . Thank you
I really like the idea and all but i have a question. You said that there is no harem, but will there be normal romance or Not?And will he be overpowered?
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Yes yes yes!! This is story telling at its finest for sure ? . The build up in this story has you on edge at times also just how op can kai get. Legendary. Really hope for the sake of the joy I get from reading this story that it continues. Worthy of two power stones..reading marathon with only 6 hrs sleep in 3 days. Every waking hour reading this incredible work of genius. Would have awarded a 5 star ? but some words are muddled eg. Take and talk but aside from that you got love this story . Cultivation, magic ancient ruins, OP Mc and sub party.
After an eternity i read a original story on the same level as a top tier translated story. The mc is great and the story plays out really well its a hidden gem
What person doesn't like a Pizza?A weirdough!Hahahahhahahah..... You will be A weirdough too if you won't like this novel! Kidding...... the novel is good as always. Des always has the quality in her novels! You guys should give it a try!
Another amazing story with an interesting and exciting storyline.Another amazing work from this brilliant author.Well done and keep up with the good work!
