character name are chinese but it have mixed hindu(indian) .style which is fixed perfectly. Some Chinese novel depicts or other nation god or hindu god as a negative or disrespect them , which is not in here as an indian I love this , that they are well-written and respected here.
The plot armor is too thick. Boring. .
- The idea is good, but author don't have good logic, ex; Li yunmu make fake avatar named Li Yun, Li Feng. Bloody hell!!- Mc did'n have unique character, except ret*arded decision making- Plot that make you want to punch on author face and Li yunmu!!
Surprisingly I liked this.(At chapter 40)The main character actually has some characteristics to him, as characters should, unlike let’s say the third ‘I get 10,000 fold return from my disciples’ ripoff that I have been reading recently.The story background though is basically the same as the others: generic with small differences from the others. (So far atleast)No cringe worthy face slapping.Just, I like it. Give it a try.
[Up until chapter 23]Deleted my other review cause it was trash compared to what I'll say now.Nothing needs to be said cause this is just that good.An absolutely lovely read you have to try out no questions asked.Author well written ?
Quick question has custom made demon king been dropped?Anyways this novel is pretty good. The story is kind of like Saw and Death Note mixed together.
First at all,I don't think the author is using filler words and filler passages or even filler characters up to this point. The author has a nice way to describe things being not too superficial nor too detailed (both kinda a bit annoying if done all the time for me). I like reading this light novel. It's fun and there is a character development to see - socially (kinda totally upside down though, if the MC thinks THAT is people oriented... - but that's part of the humor I guess) and physically as well. The character is kinda mature and focused on what is important to begin with as he also needs to regard their finances. At the same time the Mc does not adapt and is kinda asocial towards others because of his system, without yet exaggerating it nor being too harmful or breaking the law, but staying at legal boundaries. The cultivation system is interesting and the system seems to troll the MC but the Mc sees this as an advantage as well, maybe the system has a plan and fits perfectly to him? While the Mc got OP in comparison to the classmates, he is mindful of dangers, if he would expose himself. On one hand he's creating distress to gainPoints for the system. On the other hand he stays low key and develops fast under the radar or possible dangers. All in all, a very funny and mindful read, with having slice of life implemented in it as well (which is not a filler in my opinion but slice of life - filler would be more like unreasonable action scenes popping up with no regards to the story for me)So I like it. This novel makes it into my top 3, where I don't differentiate what is better or worse.
The book is so aweeeeeeeeeesommmme.I'd shamelessly promote and recommend another book I love. who?¿ by Khenny Esther. You should check it out when you have time, not of this genre but really interesting
I liked this story... up to a point.If you are interested in mechs, mech battles and upgrades, this is a story you'll definitely like. This story painted the lifestyle so well it almost made me go out and purchase the latest Mechwarrior game out on Steam!The world background makes sense, the character backgrounds are interesting and a bit mysterious, and their progression makes sense and is consistent.The only thing that was off for me was their emotional states.Most of the time, the emotional reactions of the characters are within human norms and are believable. Kids get frustrated with their parents, or are wary about their teachers, or have a love of mechs because they are "cool". It's later on in the story that I have some issues.When a big loss hits our main character, he doesn't seem sad per se. He just stays around to do what he can then moves on to complete his task. There is little to no reflection of him mourning that loss or that loss affecting him emotionally or inhibiting him. Later, he finds what he has lost but there is no sense of real relief from him. It's just another day, it seems, and life goes on. The same thing happens to the other characters around him. They encounter losses but don't really feel the loss. It's almost like they are brainwashed or on drugs. Or it is just a tragic story that happened on the news. It doesn't affect how they live their lives (even though it happened to them or people they knew).So while overall I'd rate the story as a 4, I am dropping reading this story because of the lack of emotional development of the characters. If you don't really care about that sort of thing and love mech stories, it's worth a read.
I happen to be completely in love with this book. It has me laughing at some parts like some mad person. It updates frequently, but I still wish there was more. ? Why can't there be more in a week. I have decided to re-read it just because.
what the heck? ! he kills so many monster but didnt even level up? ! and for petes sake he is a supporter he didnt buff his party member....
I feel like, I'll fall deeply in love with this piece of work! Kudos❤️❤️