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"I can't believe I get to see my idol this close! He's so handsome!!" the other girl exclaimed.
I like reading Kingdom building novels and when this novel started I thought this was one of the best KB novels on web novel but recent chapters has been a huge let down. reading till chapter 350, the MC comes from a modern world yet has not shown any progress when handling diplomacy. I mean the way author has shown how diplomacy is handled by Riz or Rythium kingdom is very basic, even having a minister and ministry to handle external affairs they have not shown professionalism or handled things properly post war. Also why has author neglected the Spy network when crucial information about war and certain things have not been passed back to kingdom, the Inver issue was handled badly. Also the way war was won by being lucky is kinda let down. Hopefully author improves these things ( read other kingdom building novels if you have to).
"Im seriously 4390814980413098123409831249801498023410989239080000 stronger than you i'm introduce myself the lord of the lord of the universe yeah my name's colbob hehehe"
The story line has been great so far, with diverse characters, great world background, along with many secrets not revealed, which will be known along the way. Don’t let the first few chapters discourage you, the story gets better as it progresses. The updating speed is quite slow, faster updates might give it a better ranking.
I honestly recommended this hidden gem to everybody. Its just too good with good plot and nice comedic undertone this book is a good read. 5 STARS RECOMMENDED.
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Good story so far, as of chapter 40, main character is developing nicely, other characters are being flushed out as the story develops, intrigue and interest about the power system is increasing as we progress, the world stage develops and we learn about it as we progress in the story, keep up the good work Sir. AUTHOR.
so far so good i have read read up to chapter 11 I just hope the updates keep coming because i love world building with modern technology webnovels please dont drop
too long of a build up, inconsistent grammar, MC has a weird mindset, odd s**ual assault bit added in, cliche after cliche. I don't know what I'm reading sometimes.
Yeet!!! Time to start this review!!! Writing Quality is nice and although has some wrong grammars, It can be easily proofread, don't worry???. It's really commendable how the story moved on so far being the POV and the pacing an abstract form. Heck, the MC is different but the POV was not???, I commend you for that. World Background is nicely portrayed too!!! All in all, your story has an interesting premise, keep up the good work.