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I find this novel very interesting! It is just my type that gives the feeling of having deals with the devil (mc).Furthermore I find his abilities very interesting while not being OP it has room for growth.In conclusion this is a good novel do not hesitate to give it a try!
i love everything about this novel.Fun characters, cute story, both mc are cute together ?. i like their interaction with their family and friends. it is enjoyable novel!
I am Steven and I really like your book and I'm waiting on your next chapter. I am interested in your book and I want to show all my viewers it. I want to publish your book on my webnovel. I'm here asking permission.
Just have a 5* good novel keep it up.
I enjoyed each chapter, it is easy to digest and also the sequence between one chapter and the next does not leave you feeling lost. In addition, the plot is captivating, it motivates you to continue reading and wanting to discover what awaits you in the next chapter.
Obligatory "shameless 5-star".My synopsis doesn't say a lot, so I thought that if there are any questions in need of answers, just put them here, and I will, well.. answer them.
first of all, don't make this cringe, and second of all give it some slice of life moment to enjoy the world and make the mc have some level of common sense,don't make him like [ you dare to hit me now I kill you literary] don't make him have a harem, and most importantly don't make him unsatisfied with what he gains,make him smart where he uses the most efficient way to increase his power,don't give the skip training instant power moment, in this kind of novel progress of every moment make us happy and make him smart enough to finding new way to make him strong and earn some money.if you are saying that it became suspicious then I will tell you some thing instantly attaining power is more suspicious and if he work other area and work on his power he will gain power and money and most importantly knowledge and experience.
Me interesa mucho esta novela, no hay muchas de starcraft y la vedad queria una ...........................................................
Writing Quality: 3.5/5 (rounds to 4)Your writing is not made, there are a few mistakes and the wording is either too much added words or worded weirdly. Update Stability: 5/5 I give that too everyone Story Development: 4/5Not bad; the pacing and plotline is good. Your story is very interesting, and the first chapter is hookable which is important.Character Design: 4/5I like your MC, but I still feel a disconnect to him. World Background 3.5/5 (rounds to four)I like the world behind your story, but I feel like I don't know much pertaining to your story; especially with the game.
I like the statement 'I am naked' Also like the fact that there are demon beasts, I don't usually read these types of novels but I do like this one a bit, if your into that stuff then sure go ahead and read it, I don't read books past the first few chapters anymore.
Good piece but the writing quality is not up to standard its hard to understand