Sword Fate

I'm just gonna go ahead and give it a 5 for the potential this story has. I do hope the MC does not act childish and ridiculous in the future. In my opinion, for this type of story I prefer a low-key 'mysterious' and OP MC. If I had to criticize, it would be how the conversation between the Admin and MC doesn't feel realistic and flow properly. I'm going to end this review short and keep up the good work Author-san!

I hate books, Pls do not judge the novel based on my review, I gave 1 star because I simply hate books and this kind of complicated stuff...

bad writing waste of timethe story has so much bs mc provoked enemy blabbering,repeatmc does nothing waste of chapterdon't read this u will get brain damage

I want this to get picked................------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

i have read up to the latest translated chapter in here..the novel is good so far. but i hope the translator picks it up again..i tried reading the MTL and its a mess.

Writing Quality: 3.5/5 (rounds to 4)Your writing is not made, there are a few mistakes and the wording is either too much added words or worded weirdly. Update Stability: 5/5 I give that too everyone Story Development: 4/5Not bad; the pacing and plotline is good. Your story is very interesting, and the first chapter is hookable which is important.Character Design: 4/5I like your MC, but I still feel a disconnect to him. World Background 3.5/5 (rounds to four)I like the world behind your story, but I feel like I don't know much pertaining to your story; especially with the game.