Elyon
AUTHOR!!!!! THANK YOU for starting to write again I really love this book of yours and I was a bit disappointed when you stopped writing it ?
This is an adventure that leaves you in the edge of your seat, takes you high, and will drop the bottom of your world. An amazing book full of life like we can only dream of. Guaranteed an incredible read that will have you enjoying re-reading it from the beginning, aham, over a half dozen times.
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Kinda worried about their story. I mean he killed her brother and father and she also killed his people. But then again how could she fell in love with her family murderers. Worried but excited because from Auxilary chapter also saw how she won't be bending for his love. She is fighting back and that too very well!
This is a very interesting novel I recommend it for everyone to read , please try and read it.?
it's a very intriguing story with a variety of characters with different goals which are similar to most people if put under similar circumstances.
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The plot was refreshing as the concept is kind of new. Many opportunities to explore. The story does have potential. Character design is also okay.The only downside I found is that there very noticeable grammatical and writing errors. Not the worse I've seen but still a sore thumb. Overall with editing and proofreading this can immensely improved. Consider getting help in editing or try using tools and software on this area.
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Call me petty all you want but when the numbers in story are not consistent, I cant give better review..........................................................
he’s a rock and i like roch and apparently he’s a smart rock now so i like him even more and then he became a very big brain rock so 5 stars
I concur with most reviewers here: The story starts incredibly strong and immediately draws you in. The author is good with descriptions, i.e. you can picture a lot of the scenes very well. Keep going strong!
