Majestical_potato
Title says "EXTRAAAAAA" but lemme guess.. later on our MC will be revealed to be either a Regressor/BlessedByGod/TheGodHimself or maybe an Ancestor/Primogenitor midway of the story. lol
it's quite boring and unreasonable. The System is too heaven defeating, normally the stronger you get the more difficult it's to level up, in this novel it's the opposite.
What’s this one piece
This novel is worth reading. Its very nice author. Specially FL pick up lines. Please carry on similar works.
Interesting where is the update
Let's see how it goes, i like a good revenge story and this seems to be it. The MC is smart and seems to be moving with intention. I also think what you are doing with the round table is so cool.
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The theme is good but are u for real a two year old going and killing, okey i understand its cultivation they develop faster no big deal , but oh boy the writing is terrible. Like a good third of sentances are butcherd and dont make any sense. I forced myself to get to premium chapters in hope author got sober but it just got worse. If this novel gets edited to look like some decent art u can coment soo i come back becose as I said the theme is interesting but before that i hope i can forget what I have read.
why author drop this novel
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I'm typing this review for the sake of people who are wondering what's the hype about only to find the start is arguably worse to read than MTL.
At the moment, I'm typing this having read up to chapter 179. Yes, the presentation gets better. Around chapter 80, or 130-ish officially.
Personally, you have to be in a mindset to read it for dumb fun and have the litrpg kick as there are a few twists early on but nothing impressive so far. There are elements of OPness as well such as the MC getting much higher stats for his level, getting good equipment, etc.
It could change as I get deeper into the story since it does focus on some side characters like the vice guildmaster, the pioneer, etc.
The story takes more of a POV from being the overlord of a city from a kingdom-building standpoint and unlike with RSSG, they actually acknowledge the achievements. Instead of spitting on the guild like they are trash, they simply acknowledge they aren't a true super guild but also an anomaly amongst first-rate guild.
Overall, I will revisit this once either I stop reading or finish the book.
I like the novel, but at the same time get really annoyed by it.
The writing style consists of repeating itself and going in circles which causes very little progress is made in a lot of chapters.
The MC is arrogant petty and once showed his superiority by basically argueing with a 5-year old by being more childish.
Overall: I like the powersystem and the world but the writing and characters not.
