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Today's chapter is better the then the last one in my opinion, well I liked the forbidden fruit part mostly. Yuan was excited from the excitement that his fantasy will nw became a reality
Writing Quality: The author describes the scenes vividly. His/her vocabulary is vast, I spotted little to no redundant words.Story Development: It was all good. But the opening is quite cliche, I often read on those old generation novels. Tho, it wasn't a bad thing. The author almost perfectly done what's needs to be done on the first 3 chaps. Like, reader's substitution to the MC. Letting us know the circumstances, the world building, and so on.Character Design: The MC is Multidimensional. His character was done well. As for the side characters, it's easy to imagine how they are like. The way the author describes their traits is commendable.Updating Stability: Not badWorld Background: It was interesting! Especially his new family and the hints. Overall: From the scale 1-10, this book scored 8. It's not bad!
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After reading to the latest chapterAll I can say is GOLD .Although there's some chapter that the translation is poor ..at least it improvedAnd trust me it's getting better so be patient my Friend??.. ?
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I don't remember much as I read it long time ago and I thing I only read it like 20-50 chapter so u can say this is not a review but my deep shit frustration to this novel.
1) mc is a dumb ass bitch mother fucking 0 iq appshit.why? because he want to be strong and unlike some dick green head in some anime he actually work hard.and he got a good monster as price.now you all thing that's genuinely a good mc as he hard work and strives for what he wants right?
no he reject the monster For stupid silver sparrow.now I don't know if this sparrow is transformed to some mighty phenoix or not in later chapter.but from what I remember this sparrows is the thotest thot a sparrow can ever be.she act like a queen but we all know she a bitch.if anything I will bitch slap that sparrow and drill it into the mc's ass.
2)what ever shit mc do he won't make any progress.i mean he actually gets strong superfast in some deep macho art that require being a masochist.but even after it he can't beat any bitch.
more over he is in some deep shit relation with the sparrow I thing as he is a beta mc who actually get trolled by a freaking sparrow.not any heroine (if he got any.the way this story going he will gets ntred for sure)but a freaking sparrow.its like he won't even have a courage to **** a sparrow and teach her the place she belong but alas mc has dick that's smaller than a sparrows ass.
3)the whole world is weird for me.like the whole world is trying to NTR mc.
you will get this feel when you read.like how much good he is on something but nobody cares.at the sametime some rich kid tried some half ass shit then here you go the genius of the century.like the world is trying to prove that mc is some mc of an hentai NTR manga.i don't like that wibe at all.
4)did I talk about the sparrow?she is a bitch a bitch that is born from bitch,for a bitch and all the bitch.by the bitch ,to the bitch and all the bitch English word could muster.
and worst of all she can't even be usefull as a bitch.
Well,
you have a new story don't get much about the world, the progression in storyline is pretty slow so you don't have much to talk about...
Release is 7 chapters a week not 14 as it implies at the top and premium at chapter 40 so well if you don't want to spend 8 SS per chapter in wich you couldn't even read a whole scene then just don't read this novel isn't worth your time.
Have a good day
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Very promising story, a lot of potential.
The setting and characters are introduced fast and effectively, the characters and plot evolve naturally although some parts seem a bit fast or flipped through.
Definitely a good read if you like anti-heroes and the super-hero genre.
THE STORY IS GREAT!
ARE YOU DROPEN THE SON OF BROKEN TING OR....??? WE NEED NEW CHAPTERS.....FAST
....,,HOW LONG ARE WE GOING TO WAIT...:((
wow amazing story .......