The premise and novel systems are really eye-catching. This really seems like it has potential to break the mold. But for the love of my life, the grammar and the abstract wording used here are life-draining. Author, please edit your chapters from the beginning or pay someone to do so. You can hire mw if you want. The only good thing I can say about the writing is that it is at most understandable. Too bad, the plot is nice.
