A gripping story! The beginning gives a solid introduction to the status and environment of the protagonist, clearly depicting the current means of survival. I personally really enjoyed the little touch of mystery added to the first few chapters, with the identity of the protagonist being half shrouded in darkness. The writing flowed nicely and did not have any grammar errors.This is the type of novel that really makes you think. It effortlessly submerges you into the story, leaving you craving for the next chapter.All in all, it was quite an enjoyable read. Looking forward to future chapters ^^
I would give a five star for this book a five star but I can’t trust this man and his characters. He updates a lot though and writes many a chapters.
At first, the book was quite mediocre. I didn’t think much of it and expected nothing special. HOWEVER, after about 100 chapters, the story picked up and I was utterly enthralled. I couldn’t keep my nose out of this beautiful piece of art. There are some mistakes throughout, but all of its good qualities far outweigh any inconvenience a reader comes across. Seeing everything come together and trying to guess what the protagonist is thinking is incredibly exhilarating. I can’t wait for the next chapter. Keep it up Author. Bless you and your beautiful mind.
I mean its a little double standard to talk about being racist considering most of movie of every country! when they want to save the world!!! its only mean their own country.
its got better in recent year but still...
Bro
He conpletely Ruined sukunas character….,!:&/?.?.?:?/?.?:?:?:?:?. .?;’(&4$/7-@2&;!;7.’/!;$;@:’/):&;!4&/839(@(‘$;:$:):)3$3&3&;$474&3&;7;$;$;&
I read a bit of the raws. Perhaps one of the most relaxing reads I've read. The Author keeps it respectful. He writes fun characters like Uncle Zhang with the comedy-relief Animals. Yes, you might have read a lot of Streaming novels but I've noticed that only few get it right. The 'Streaming Comments' is what makes this Novel so fun. (I thought they'd be annoying and pointlessly ruin this novel) I was wrong. If only we had more POVs or stronger roles to them...
I hope this gets translated to motivate the Author's long break.
It's not a bad idea that you came up for the story what I hate is the way your trying to build a love for the mc and Lucy I does not fit when I read it somehow it feel strange even is hit hate was sealed and the mc feels kind of stupid ? Why can't you speak after 100 ?? Your shy to communicate to even an ant ? Really. You have necromancy and you fond use it but only focus on dark magic waiting a good dead knight lvl 50+ and then running to a Academy when your basically lvl 90. Idk men it's confusing so sadly I dropped it
Except for writing qualities, everything is good in this book. Author, you should correct all those typos in chapters.
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Haven't read it yet, but judging by the description of the novel alone tell me that the novel is gonna be bad. Like seriously how do you trust a novel that word structure are bad due to grammar error and more.
Reviewed up to chapter 8.
The writing quality is on the rough side. The POV switches mid-scene - however, this does seem to be a trend on Webnovel in general -, the pros don't quite flow, and there are grammar errors peppered throughout. However, the writing quality improves dramatically after the first two chapters.
The story is paced well. While fast, it allows time to set up the relationship between the main characters, their situation, and their initial goals before getting thrown into the plot.
While the character descriptions are in "blocks" the characters themselves have personalities. Beyond some of the dialogue being on the janky side, the characters have unique voices. And I do appreciate the relationship between the leads. It's obvious they care about each other.
The world has some unique qualities to it. It's obvious that the writer is well versed in a range of anime and pop culture, and that shows in the world-building. :)