The_Last_Native
i really like this story. the concept is so funny how they interact with each other .good good good goodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgood
bro the synopsis is weird
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The novel isnt bad but it isnt really farming based and is more like an anime where the mc uses his rewards to get more rewards. The quality of writing is fine.
great novel
good one
get picked better than most of them
Demonetization is a drastic intervention into the economy that involves removing the legal tender status of a currency. Demonetization can cause chaos or a serious downturn in an economy if it goes wrong.
This story is interesting it more about how the Character develops i think so which good there also competition hopefull not all his enemies are petty all the time we can get a good competitor . if the story is gonna be repetitive then not worth it . Like they dont pay they are horrible you do good and get good business blah blah hopefully author you don’t do that
While the story setting seems unique and interesting, with hidden organisations and what not, that's about the only thing of interest.
The characters are all, without exception, broken and so superficial that it gets annoying when they just interact.
I still don't understand how the harem tag comes into play here, since the mc is probably one of the most unlikeable characters if seen so far. He couldn't even care for his mom, who somehow managed to pay the bills for them to not end up on the street.
the annoying part about that is that this not caring about anyone and not having emotions for anyone is emphasised repeatedly for no reason at all.
Interesting world building with (imo) terrible character design.
Good luck
it time skips to the most interesting points, the mc is a different breed than other mcs, he is op, but he is neither an overbearing young master nor a hermit. he does keep, but he doesn't hesitate to use his power to protect what is important to him. it's similar to a my bestfriend is the mc type, with his junior sister being the mc.
It starts out okay with an intresting premise but it’s ruined by the nationalism. I’m guessing the author got in trouble for not having enough nationalism so he went overboard.
A character who is a foreigner is suddenly stated to have seven-eigths bloodline from the nine provinces (China) out of nowhere. Im guessing this might be because having a genius not from China is a big no-no. It later states this is why the headmaster accepted him as a student and he wouldn’t have otherwise.
The main charcter’s feats are repeatedly stated to show how glorious they were with 5000 years of history. This is mentioned so many times I usually just skim a few paragraphs when it comes up. The patriotism would be fine if it weren’t for the author degrading other countries to make China seem superior.
OK now it´s official, the Story is f.... up ....
random jumps, sometimes buy thing then don´t have them, charactors appears randomly (no story when joining)
autor must be drunk or smoke all day..... rly.... good story potential but that crashed it
Look ch 73: before Irene (Nun) wasn´t in the team, now she is it, Q: when did she join and how?!!!!!
CH 68: buy
Elementary swimming skill books 500.
Intermediate swimming skill books 1000.
-> CH 71 gets swimming skill book that he needs the most -.-
Alright, let's get started with positives.
The writing is good and the plot of the story is slow and interesting, developing characters very well. reading it in big chunks is the ideal way of reading the book and rewarding. The MC and the world are not nice and something you can appreciate and you do not see the MC find one hard to find treasure after the other.
The first arc was great and showed the life of common people and the second arc showed the life of wealthier nobles and it continues on shining light on the world. Worldbuilding is good.
MC and Juno's relationship is quite unique and interesting. The goddess's introduction and interference are annoying but an element that shows there is more growth than that MC needs to undergo.
Now on the negatives.
He does experience trauma and his character becomes more sadistic, but his response to Marana, Dinah's sister (Alice I think) and some other characters are less than adequate. He does have enough clear thinking to understand them and pushing them away from harm's way but he does the opposite many times, makes it hard to accept his actions.
While the people who treated you badly you can screw with, not those that cared for you.
Even worst his treatment of those that fu%k with him is very friendly and nice, while those that appreciate him and care for him are used by him. If the people that would stick around are a*sholes, is it even worth caring about his future if it only consists of the worst people in the empire with mental issues?
The goddess's interference in every one of his action gets a bit annoying at times, while a limited amount is good for the story but the constant appearance makes one think what is the point of this if all of this will be later screwed by the goddess anyway. The intrigue no longer lies with the result of his action, but how the goddess will ruin it.
Another positive is the Comedy of Dick Baker. This did bring a change to the story and was integrated wonderfully, The Arc removed some of the extra gloom from the story. The MC going deeper and deeper in darkness was no longer interesting.
Another negative his way of only being happy in someone's misery constantly happens too often. He only gets happy and aroused to see someone miserable. Once in a while, if he does get happy of his own violation, it would be nice.
Overall, it is a unique story and an interesting read. You do have to read a chunk of it to get a better understanding of the plot and do not judge it quickly because there is more to it.
Well done . I like it......................................................... ......................................................................
For anyone wondering, I think the novel has the potential to be fantastic. However, the author desparately needs to hire an editor. You can understand what is happening and what the author is describing, but the verbiage and sentence structure is really, really bad.
