Not exactly the genre I would usually go for, nonetheless, the plot doesn't disappoint. The author's writing skills are up to the level until this point!
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I can just appreciate that you write such a good book!I just loveeee it?❤️------Soooo I catched up with with the chapters and can say that the book is really well written as well as the character design. The Mc is pretty Badass and knows what he is doing (in terms of survival and not women...*caugh*caugh* Amandla) and the side characters are as well pretty damn good(execpt Francis he is not my type characteristically because I find him a bit annoying). I would love too she Lazar keep growing and find new powers! Keep up your great work Author-san and happy new year and enjoy your holidays! ?❤️
Pretty standard garbage wuxia novel. I don’t think there is anything else expected of this novel except the standard harem troupe and the bad leveling.
Alright, let's get started with positives.The writing is good and the plot of the story is slow and interesting, developing characters very well. reading it in big chunks is the ideal way of reading the book and rewarding. The MC and the world are not nice and something you can appreciate and you do not see the MC find one hard to find treasure after the other. The first arc was great and showed the life of common people and the second arc showed the life of wealthier nobles and it continues on shining light on the world. Worldbuilding is good. MC and Juno's relationship is quite unique and interesting. The goddess's introduction and interference are annoying but an element that shows there is more growth than that MC needs to undergo.Now on the negatives. He does experience trauma and his character becomes more sadistic, but his response to Marana, Dinah's sister (Alice I think) and some other characters are less than adequate. He does have enough clear thinking to understand them and pushing them away from harm's way but he does the opposite many times, makes it hard to accept his actions. While the people who treated you badly you can screw with, not those that cared for you. Even worst his treatment of those that fu%k with him is very friendly and nice, while those that appreciate him and care for him are used by him. If the people that would stick around are a*sholes, is it even worth caring about his future if it only consists of the worst people in the empire with mental issues? The goddess's interference in every one of his action gets a bit annoying at times, while a limited amount is good for the story but the constant appearance makes one think what is the point of this if all of this will be later screwed by the goddess anyway. The intrigue no longer lies with the result of his action, but how the goddess will ruin it.Another positive is the Comedy of Dick Baker. This did bring a change to the story and was integrated wonderfully, The Arc removed some of the extra gloom from the story. The MC going deeper and deeper in darkness was no longer interesting.Another negative his way of only being happy in someone's misery constantly happens too often. He only gets happy and aroused to see someone miserable. Once in a while, if he does get happy of his own violation, it would be nice. Overall, it is a unique story and an interesting read. You do have to read a chunk of it to get a better understanding of the plot and do not judge it quickly because there is more to it.
I've seen dense MCs, I've seen stupid naive MCs. I've seen obsessively idiotic MCs. But this MC takes the stage above all other BETA MCs. And he is actually the fkng alpha. Nice premise and good background story. I don't know why but the author turned this MC so dense he cannot even understand his beard was never liked by the females even if they say it in face. Wow, talk about living in denial so much. Tunnel vision is heavy in this guy.
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The Story is very fascinating and thank you Author for not making it a Harem ?Grammar could use a little bit of polishing. Also, a little bit more character and world build up would be nice. Other than that this novel is superb! Great Job Author.
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I can't get enough of this story. I think this might win for my favorite story of the year, unless it ties with one other story, as the rest so far are not as much fun, fulfilling or fascinating as this one is. It feels fresher for the way it's put together. I'm moved through wide range of feelings. I would love to see drawings from this story because the ones that come to mind are breathtaking from what I've read so far. My only wish is that I could read this in its original language; something is always lost in translation. I look forward to reading this. I wish you, Sanseiu, much success in this story.