Haven’t written a review in a while but after getting introduced to qi shan I just can’t keep reading. My soul hurts reading about her interactions with mc and her effect on him and how the story has shifted. I honestly don’t know how they will redeem her I doubt they can. Even if they did I don’t think I care anymore. I am just left with massive disappointment and regret on starting this story since it was so promising.
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Uhh its not good and the only reason im posting this is because if the author thinks that this novel is worth 10-18 credits a chapter that is just absurd. Basic grammar errors and very basic and easily proofread mistakes is not worth anyones well earned paycheck. The story does not suspend my disbelief. The story also falls to the same “i have lived for thousands of years but im gonna act mentally defecient even though im supposed to be very old and wise” trap that usually is more common place in cultivation novels. Pro tip to the author your characters will never be more intelligent then you so try to find a way to “trick” or give the “illusion” of intelligence to your characters dont say they are intellegent or have other people react to basic problem solving in awe or make everyone else incapable of basic deduction its just off putting.
This is just good.Very interesting premise, executed well, good enough grammar, only real complaint is that it's not being updated.The main characters are interesting, and when they are together they become amazing. The whole power system is interesting and actually new enough that it's exciting. So far we haven't really gotten any of the disciples, but it's starting on that part now, as soon as the author comes back of course(please come back).Recommend this to everyone who likes a good supernatural mystery.
I kinda liked it, it was a fun read. I hope that the author continues the work and finish it deservingly.
Story is alright. Nothing crazy, but enough to pass some time without thinking of pulling your hair out. The translation on the other, complete garbage. In chapter 77 for example, one of the lairs is upgraded from rare rank to rare rank. Yes folks, that's not a typo, it's mentioned multiple times in that chapter that the lair upgraded TO THE SAME RANK. I can only offer the middle finger to the translator and bail out. Good luck to the fellow readers sticking it out with all these a*s translators and translation groups.
Making grammatical mistakes is fine since you're new and english isn't your main language. You're doing great for a first timer, so keep up the good work!(๑¯ω¯๑)
This novel is hilarious and all the characters are so easily likable, it is really a joy to read! I couldn't put it down and finished it in a single sitting!
It’s good. keep up the good work.
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450 Chapters (Ongoing)
Achieving the power to create virtual worlds.
To expand his world, he needs to devour other worlds.
As such, the world ushered in the most greedy, sly and terrifying existence in the world ——— The Gamer
An amazing story. The author has nicely displayed the world of VR in this story. Fight scenes are nicely portrayed. While the concept seems similar to other stories, the skills to write a good story must be noted. The development is well paced and I look forward to the updates. Nice work
Starts out a bit choppy and it’s hard to immerse yourself but once you hit chapter 10 it all starts to come together and gets good
Give it a chance and you may like it
I will admit the power/ ranking system makes very little sense, no real explanation behind how martial arts actually function. I mean he found a martial art on the internet and just used it...