Plot summary is good... Kinda excited... So I'll cast my daily votes for this... I just wish this not a harem.. Not that I care I just don't like harem...
So far it's good read!!~truthfully if we compare it with your other novel, this novel is the best!!~bla....bla.....bla.....bla......140 character is hard if I didn't have any complaint lol!~well at least I hope there will be no cliches plot until the end!~
The setting seems interesting and it has potential but needs serious editing. There are lots of grammar mistakes and unnecessarily long sentences here and there.
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I had recently reviewed and praised the novel, about how good it is. But when I read chapter no 540 enlightened I was shocked and disappointed. Everything that made Mc who he is, whole story was completely and forcedly changed. It become same other countless trash. I was really hopefull that I found a good novel but alas.
Actually the best Trial novel this time around interesting plot the cheat is pretty cool and lots of mysteries to figure out …………………………………….
wish fulfillment novel delivered poorly, author must be an ******* with no sense of pacing, story is all over the place with a bland mc, stories like this are usually fun to read if written properly but this novel is simple a masterful work of garbage not even worth reading to pass the time
incredible work. It is amongst the most captivating web novels I have read that has good grammer, interesting plot, fantastic world building and badass mc. I just feel that it was abit inappropriate to mention US navy seals just to emphasize how cool the mc is.
It is a good book. I recommend readers try it. Till chapter 67, the story so far is good and different from reverse swordmen manhua to which people usually compare it. So give it a try! It's not entirely the same till now. Concepts of being alone powerful male can be similar but the plot till now is different. I hope the author regularly updates which the author doesn't till now! I'm looking forward to more chapters.
Wow i hope it gets picked...i love that mc will be a villain behind the scenes ??????it will be interesting thing to read... this month trial read are not bad
I regret to say that I am dropping this novel, which is a pity because I have such high hope in the beginning chapters.But the characters brain-damage actions (most of them) convince me otherwise.First, the grandmother.Grandmother, stop messing with your grandson's love life. I know you want great grandkids but you can't drag every girls in sight and dump them into his lap. And what the heck is telling each of them you love them and won't let the boy mistreat them? The one to mistreat them the most is YOU! If you love someone, would you try to hook her lover WITH ANOTHER GIRL?!Then The immortal grandma.I know you love your disciple and all. But when your disciple fall for a guy with owner, instead of consulting her to stop it, you go everywhere lobbying the guy to break up with his rightful fiancee and go with your disciple?? Do you think your disciple would be happy you force a guy to stay with her? And if the guy willingly go to your disciple, would you really want such an unfaithful guy to be with her? And what is is rant about how he is mistreating your disciple? They were never an item, how can there be mistreatment?ZiHonestly the one I like best. She is annoying as hell but at least she doesn't do the stupid ****.Class Prez (who are no longer one)You should stop the minute you know he has a fiancee. Why do you still stick to him and be doubtful whether he has something with that girl when he is the one to tell you that is his fiancee?Hao RenYou are not a good guy. Decide already, you moron. Decide who you like and come clean. Wait, there is nothing to decide. You know you have to marry Zi, or she dies. And that is also the deal you struck with her parents who was extremely nice to you! So what are you doing acting like that to the other girl and give her hope? You tell her not to go abroad. You hold her hand. You ask her out. You sit beside her on the bus. You are silent when everyone tease that you guys are an item. And then many chapters after that you say you are not her boyfriend?! If this is not lover's behaviors then what is?!!!!
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