I have been waiting for an update for a while now and I genuinely like this novel I hope that it keeps updating regularly.
... ... ... Dude. My eyes are aching. I was intrigued by that one bad grammar review and nasty responses to it, and a truckload if 5* reviews... So, I've decided to give it a spin, but, in all honesty, looks like machine translation that was left unatended. Just the first chapter gangbanged my poor eyes without a lube. I don't have anything against people trying their hand on the art of writing, but I think you should at the very least respect your readers with some quality. As it seems, a lot of people are trying to support your story, why don't you ask someone to proofread and/or edit it for you? The 1* comes from writing quality, the rest is at it too just to not falsely boost the value, as I think the story itsekf can't be so vad if people git yoyr back.
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This is NOT an original novel, its taken from another site. Just google it and you can find a bunch of chapters on it. Its still being translated, with a chapter or 2 every few days coming out. This idjit didn't even give a proper description or credits to the translator before posting it here.
Seems interesting, hopefully it’ll be picked.
he named it after a dying star and believed the world was born cause of it's deaththe thing is he was dying and he built it................
Excellent story, the begin was very stylish and interesting, lots of info dump which the author must reduce but rest all was good. Action packed and thrilling which I liked.Hope the author continues his work...
This story is just god awful. Don't read it. We have an extremely boring plot with an MC who just watches people play a game and a "loli" by his side who the MC decides to kiss and be a pedo. The readers seem to lap it up.
I gotta thank people who wrote the bad reviews that got me into this book. And I don't see much wrong with the quality of the translation. Thus book maybe hentai but the doctor whatever book those people who wrote bad reviews about are just a bunch of butt hurt people who are dreaming about a rich Doctor CEO to marry and take them away. First look at yourself first and think about of all people the rich doctors or CEO can choose why the fk would they choose you
Wow, I'm first to review this novel! I hope this is good as it looks really cool! Is this kingdom builiding??? OMG! It's too good to be true...
I think this story has a lot of Potential.It may not seem like the Mc may be OP but that's because he's playing casually. I think the Author is gonna write some sort of motivation so that he will play the game more seriously.I also want to know more about he's background that made people call him a genius.That aside I also like funny parts where his family is so overprotective of him and when people find he's a boy??This novel is a Gem and I hope it gets more chapter in the future.