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I know this is a minor character but I couldn't help but feel for Zinv. While everyone else is posturing and threatening and plotting revenge, she's just sitting there 'pale' with her 'internal organs felt like they were churning.' That detail is so viscerally human. After all the dramatic dialogue and spiritual pressure displays, we get this one moment of pure, unfiltered fear from someone who's just along for the ride. She's not a sect leader, she's not a protagonist, she's just a person who got caught up in something way bigger than herself. And her line 'Brother Hua, I'm not resigned to this' feels genuine—not the calculated anger of Hua Zaitian vowing revenge, but the raw panic of someone who knows they're outmatched. It's easy to get swept up in the main character's power fantasy but moments like this remind me there are real people in this world with real consequences. I also found myself oddly invested in Bai Yanrou's silence throughout this whole scene. She's been brought back to the national base only to be treated like 'street rats' without her master. Her parents were killed by Xia Ruxi. She's lost everything and she's standing there letting Yu Shen do all the talking. There's a grief there that the text doesn't explicitly show but I can feel it underneath. I wonder if she'll find her own voice in this story or if she'll remain this shadow figure following others' agendas.
Too few chapters... Imma murder you if you drop this!!.......... .....................................
ok i gave it 5 stars on all just dont drop it author san.plsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplspslspslssplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplspls pls.dont.drop.it
My first impression with Idols is that they are cheesy and much of an eye candy than substance. True, maybe they can make someone smile but for my taste I prefer Western Pop Culture and JPop more. That is before I read your story. Since this story tells about more on management, also, had some historical references which I like the most, your story caught my eye. It is unique in its own right or maybe it is just me since it is the first time I read such story. It captivates me because of your main character's perseverance in life which we all should have in our endeavors.As a reader I am entertained and interested to read more of your story. It is lighter compared to the stories I read. I may give another review soon when the story progresses. There are few errors in writing I have observed but it is not noticeable. Aside from that everything looks okay. Thank you fro inviting me to review your work.-Cipher Log
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All around a great read so far and I’m definitely looking forward to being able to read more in the future. Also I have to say I just love the little brother, he’s so cute
letting us see the character develop and grow stronger is actually pretty good I like the fact that he's growing and exploring all of his possibilities I guess
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I've read both ROTSSG and Rebirth of the thief who roamed the world and at first I thought the this novel is like your typical reincarnated person in the game story type but as I read further in the chapters I saw that the story became deeper, on all honesty there are grammar mistake here and there and sometimes it confuses me, but the author is compensating me with the good story arcs, as the other review said, the world building is a mess, at first but little by little it became clearer, I'm just looking at it in a new game perspective that the author don't want us to know the layout of the world because he himself is still exploring it. Final thoughts: At first you'll just see a generic type reincarnation game but as you go further down the novel you'll notice that the author is growing. Give it a try, if you love reincarnation games like the one that I mentioned then you will surely love this one too.
This novel can be considered as a diamond in a rough, but still needs polishing to truly stand out there.Grammar is improving at every chapter which is good, story/plot execution is between good and bad "depending on the reader's taste". I would suggest for the author to rewrite/revise old chapters with wrong spelling, grammar and loopholes when he/she has time.Overall, it's a recommended read. Has a lot of potential and the only issue I really see is like I wrote above, execution of certain scenarios.P.S. I'm still annoyed by random reviews that is only meant to bump the ratings, hopefully there's an option to erase those as the tend to give novels a bad first impression.
I really love this stories.the villain MC is always interesting and cool.And I need more chapter to satisfy my thirst here!Please keep up your good work and keep entertain us here!