GreatestGrandpa
Very very well written. Love the zombies descriptions. The vocabulary and grammar are spot on. The plot is epic but most of all, the character growth is really well done! Excellent novel!
Hello guys Author here.There is something I wants to remind to those who is thinking of reading this book.Mc is not op from the beginning, He is not coward but very thoughtful of his action. He don't go asking for troubles.And here is the main part. I know I am not that good, but I am improving everyday. I'll try my best to give everyone the best story possible.And Yes please don't drop after reading one or two chapters at least 10 chapter. and if you still don't like it please drop a review or a comment telling the reason for dropping, I'll try my best not to do those mistake in the future.Have a great day,And yes ask me any questions you like.
Though there are minor problems such as repeated use of words and some slightly confusing sentences it is overall readable. The story is good, and the characters are simplistic but real. I wouldn't pack the words like a big essay paragraph, so I think it would be a great improvement if you fix the text formatting! Good luck fellow Author!
When I started reading this book then, I thought it's a book that won't last and just stop before reaching a thousand chapters, similar to other books. Fortunately, the author proof me wrong and the book gets more interesting as it cross the thousand. @ author, since we reached the last volume, how many chapters should we be expecting more before the book finally gets it's ending? How does the affect the mc and his harem? Would it be similar to other books that just rush to finish the book or will you proof me wrong again, unlike others, that this book will have a befitting ending.
The story is a little unique, as is the title. I was immediately engrossed after reading the first chapter! I was eager to read more, and I couldn't wait to do so. I truly like how you wrote it, and it's a pleasure to read. It's now in my library.
Completed. Thanks for this amazing novel author. [img=coins][img=recommend][img=exp][img=Loving it]
I love the cover and the way the book draws you in, making you want to read it more and more. Honestly really good writing from chapter one and the plot can bee seen on good foundation by summary. World building is really hard to make and understand but it is done beautifully here.
now this IS intriguing
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this story is good and bad at the same time. i like the story but writing quality is bad. it fails to create thirst. this story could have been really great with more skilled writing.
5 stars because its romeru, but please change the cover its kinda gross................................................................................
im not really good at making reviews so all i got to say is this is one of the best concepts for a story and has one of my favorite main characters so far and i hope it gets the attention it deserves (yes im getting on my alts to review to show that i am sorry and hope it gets more people to read this)
somehow i dont feel the anti hero vibes on mc. i feel the villain vibes more on the heroes. it feels contradictory tbh. it was nice though but it was a let down that such old man died and mc has no reaction. technically the old man was the first person that made the mc feel warm at least he has been kind. i was expecting more when it says anti hero tag but so be it. 3.4 for now. reason? the writing is average but still better than any novel (4)
story development (i really cant feel thr villain vibes although mc is smart) (3)
character design (technically, each of their character development is good but not better because mc was quite naive. he easily trust too much despite being bullied all his life (trust me, I'm a victim of bullying and i know pretty much their mindset. they wont trust too much) updating stability is better, good job! (4) as for world background, you did not state what their world was in. why is their heroes and villain and how such powers came to be so it lacks info. btw some of your plots are forced upon mc so it adds up to the rating.
