I'd give it a 3/5 if it wasn't for the poor character design of the MC, and the development of the story itself lacking.I found myself skipping through paragraphs each chapter simply because they weren't entertaining and couldn't keep me focused on them. The story itself, from the 30 chapters I read, focused more on everything else than it did the MC and his own character development, which, in my opinion, destroys the entire purpose of the first bit of chapters which are typically used to introduce most characters, and show character development to the MC.The chapters themselves felt like they kept getting shorter and shorter, with like almost nothing interesting happening at all during the first 30 chapters.Overall, just a bad story, poorly thought out imo.
Why did the updates stop? Don't tell me the novel ended and I can only finish this novel by purchasing privilege! If there was an hiatus announcement, a privileged please inform, if not author please unlock the chapters!
it's really a nice novel I hope author can post many more chapters
How is he this down bad ?
I like the concept and story so far . Hope there is more dungeon building though but maybe that happens later . Need words .........
love the work and the characters are freaking enjoyable
Good novel! Good novel! Good novel!I want to see a blood bath, muhahaha.
I obviously recommend my book, but it really would be my type of read. A combination (sometimes) too obvious, fantasy with real problems of modern society, especially the author. But as the master, stephen king said: all our characters carry a little bit of us. Thus, my characters and events in the book are, in the same way that they represent my view of the world, situations I see and people I know. I can say that the purpose of the book is to represent each one's hero's journey, as we are all protagonists in our biographies.
for people who like realism novel, then i recomended this novel for you, it has basic economic, and really build the story at slow pace. and yep to bad the weakness this kind of novel is, it really need slow pace to build up the story.
story is alright inconsistent with spells were it clearly states a single target spell suddenly becomes an aoe spell doesn't tell you before he transmigrated so you know what he's been training kind of just skips all that an suddenly he's an expert also some chapters math maybe off in an obvious way but still story is decent
Hello, Author here.I don't know what to say, all I know is I'm doing a shameless review. However, if you have any questions just drop them below and I will try my best to answer them (without spoilers).
Great job, hope you can write more chapters l, thanks for your hard working, keep on,