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Is this any good
No, I'm not lying at all.
It's back.
It hasn't been translated, but the author is f*ck*ng back!!
[Btw, i can see where the misunderstanding came. I'm referring to the actual novel. Not in here]
After 100-200 chapters, the translation gets painful. And it brings tears to your eyes. It's not unreadable, but it's bad enough to affect reading pleasure. Ah...why are my eyes sweating again...I'm rating the later translations as "Requires mana to read, has 5% chance to trigger Confusion, and is below acceptable quality"
Thanks for the update keep it up
A mi me encantaría de hecho recomendar que lean esto por qué está bueno
The chapters are too wordy. The essence of what the author is trying to convey is lost within irrelevant, long and wordy sentences which could have been phrased in a much better way.
It's very nice bro and just don't make it a harem
Overall the story wasn't bad however the whole story line has so many sentimental nonsense going on making it so cringeee that it makes me sick, the story was also too generic however it was still a bit balanced at some point so it's still fine I guess....but the whole romance of the story feels like it was written by some old virgin ...*no offense author peacee xD*
I just didn't like the whole ‘sort of’ love at first sight related stuff..
Free review for adding a big sister. Now question:Is there any Yuri in the novel? (I hate it)Also, is the big sis part of MC's harem? (would be amazing from her description)Then, Is there NTR ? (also hate it deeply)Please let me know so i can read without worries. If the answers are not No, Yes, No, then i will not read since having such a top tier big sis would only make me bitter.
Just the title alone is interesting and I'm expecting lots of incredible moments in this one. The book may lack chaps as of the moment, making the world background and story progression somewhat unclear, but I'm confident enough to say that this book will end up great, considering the author's skill with his craft. I'll leave this here to tell future readers not to miss this one.
silly mary Silly Mary silly mary Silly Marysilly mary Silly Mary silly mary Silly Mary ! ! ! We will always be here for you no matter what. Beautiful Disaster no matter how renamed will always be my favorite. trust in your stories a bit more. and trust in the people who loves you and your stories. your writing is phenomenal as it is. i downloaded the app for you. and thank you for writing a Book 2!
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