HONESTLY WOW. not a lot of times you get adaptations from African culture and mythology in this platform especially, curiosity lead me into opening the book, and the tools irl have been beautifully utilised by Sam, wish this were a book, pretty darn different concept, but you gotta read it carefully and find time because THE DETAILS MATTER the author hints it (or maybe I'm trynna analyse too implicit details lol)
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writing quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐ some words are missing in most of the paragraphs but it's not a big problem.story development ⭐⭐⭐⭐4 stars because you failed to discribe some of the scenes which caused me to have a hard time imagining things but over all it's goodcharacter design ⭐⭐⭐ all the characters are good except the female characters ?
Nandhan_Kumar: The story seems very realistic , it felt like really happened in front of my eyes , they way of narration is excellent.the author really touched people's heart ??
This is a poorly thought out cross between video games and bad xanxia. To give an example, the MC runs around murdering hundreds of spirit animals to the point that there aren't anymore in a large area and earns millions for doing it. Yet somehow, none of the other powerful cultivators (say the hundreds/thousands of them that are a stage above him) think to do the same because...video game logic. The translation isn't the worst I have seen on Webnovel but it is bad. The numbers on the MCs stat page are regularly wrong, numbers rarely add properly, sentences are horrible to read at times and so on.The MC is ... not good. He has no issues killing monsters or people as soon as he sees them because ... I have no idea. He has no training for it but somehow he is just a murderhobo from day 1. He also does a ton of dumb things that are typical xanxia MC which make so much less sense in this world. His only friends are beautiful young women. I could go on but it isn't good.I really can't recommend this one.
I give 5 star rating because that synopsis is awesome lol.Still I might need more chapter and waiting it. ?????????????????
your novel is amazing, it has time travel, it has action, adventure and Mysterys the time travel arcs are very well done, character development is fast and very well written. I don't like it: the time travel arcs are creative but would leave people lost if you didn't pay close attention, in the chapters the world is vast and the magic system is similar to that of Harry Potter
This novel is great. The mystery and the plot twists are amazing. I highly recommend this novel to people who like mc's with twisted personalities.
as always in this kind of nowels everyone start good but become op and as always hard work does not mater. Person wich trained entired life lose in fight with someone which read the book and took a nap?
Well written but excruciatingly uninteresting. As usual this novel is very generic and doesn't even attempt to distinguish itself from every other simulator novel out there but that isn't my biggest gripe with this.Ever since the MC simulated the life where he writes a novel, everything feels incredibly bloated, boring and unnecessarily detailed. I don't mind the whole novel writing gimmick, what I do mind is that you could have condensed all of that nonsense into 3 chapters easily.I for the first time ever in a trial read very quickly skimmed through most of it but unsurprisingly lost none of the essence of what happened. This novel's unjustifiably enormous self indulgence is baffling and just ruined whatever little it had going for it. 0.25/5.
It's not very common here, on WN, to find a story written from the first person's point of view. It should be added that the author sticks to this formula quite well. His main character has his traumas, but who doesn't?The author meticulously builds the world he created from the beginning. The plot is intriguing. Well done!Happy new year!
I would like for the author to write more chapters and i am enjoying the story line but if the author can write more explaining on the food.