Main character is just generally unlikeable, unless you enjoy reading about womanizing annoying mc’s, in which case this is perfect for you
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Initially I wanted to wait for a few more chapters before I give my review but because I want to be one of the first ten, he it is.First things first, the writing quality is top notch, it's a top tier and a rare quality in this website. 5/5Second, the story itself is unique and a very original one, in short it is one of the kind. 5/5As for the characters, although for now they're still not a lot, they're all nicely written. They have their own feelings and is not a bland characters. 5/5The updating rate is quite unstable but it is understandable because of the fact that the author is also currently writing his other novels, for now. 5/5And lastly, the world background. Considering that this novel only has 14 chapters for now, it is doing a good job so far. The descriptions were easy to understand and imagine. 5/5P. S. I highly recommend to read this novel now and become a new, Reader of Fate.
This is the type of novel that I never knew I wanted, but once I read it, I fell in love with it. It's cute, adorable, simply fluff and sugar overload. Though, at the same it, it has a good consistent story, with good character planning, in which they feel like 3D characters, instead of some randoms. The jokes in this story are well though out, they are not exactly repetitive and they bring out the personality of the various characters in the novel. I dunno, I just love the story. I recommend giving it a try simply to experience what a well though out sugar overload feels like.
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wow, this book is amazing. You need to read it ASAP. Of course, you'd wonder how the author would manage with the supporting character premise...I did too. But the author's done exceptionally well, though he becomes the mc to us, he still acts with the supporting character idealogy, one which the author has used so well. I'll recommend this book to y'all. It's great.
I like the story, the plots not really unique but its entertaining to read. My one issue with this novel is, well, the romance aspect of it. I don't care if the MC is deranged or a lunatic, however it doesn't make any sense why its in the plot. Where exactly does MC even find time for a romance is the grand scheme of things?!?!?It's so unrealistic and contradictory to how you established character... how exactly does romance fit into a novel where the protag is motivated by ambition to overcome the laws of the world in the novel?He wants powers, he actively strives for it and disregards the life of others like insects to achieve what he wants.... and now your trying to make me believe he can suddenly love after all that he's done and willing to do?It's ridiculous. You don't establish the essence of your character as ruthless and power hungry, devoid of feeling and morality, only seeking power, to add in a romance in the middle of the novel....You might ask why you shouldn't do this? Easy! Because someone willing to do anything for power would NEVER LOVE ANYONE that would become a HUGE weakness. It contradicts your plot and established MC's sense of self/motivations/goals that the author wrote HIMSELF.You could see from the earlier chapters of this novel that the author kept trying to find ways to make a romance happen, inserting the obvious FL every chance he got and it only got worse, especially at around chapter(s) 592+ onwards. It would have been all great except how the MC progressed many many chapters earlier. We know that he's a psychopath, and he lacks any feelings. By the time the romance (AKA lovesick desperate author wants some MEOWWW) comes in, its not only unbelievable, it's an insult to readers intelligence and time spent reading.
excellent characters, if the translation and title were more appropriate it would get better readership. 12 nice clean arcs with lots of fun, raunchy and rude people. world building was good but tl issues made it confusing to work through all the synonyms of places
Intriguing
Another great start for another definitely awesome novel by J. Tarr! Looking forward to more!
I love how she becomes stronger and grows, now she can take her revenge on her own. Those triplets have done enough