I read this story and I'm impressed by the way it has been written.It has very small details that an individual faces in his /her life. This story has all mixture of sadness , joy , romance , death etc.
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more!Please I will submit my may or may not real soul?
The story goes very smoothly and at the end of each chapter, it makes you wonder what will happen next, as in the other story.???????????
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the story is so-so not exactly a revolutionary novel. ive not found that many good "player to npc" novels, and its fine to pass the time.i will give credit where its due, so far the action the mc makes are usually fairly logical, i dont sit 50% of the time asking why the mc i dumb.character interactions arent quite as limited as i first thought eg between him and players, there is various means to make contracts with players given certain conditions etc.overall the novel is written well enough but it does nothing exceptional so there is really not much to draw in the reader and is generally not worth spending money ontranslater has done an excellent job though so god speed to him/her
This cover is pulling me in right now, I really like it and I like the story line about a harsh beginning and a new struggle to become better can't wait to read this one for sure!
Everything is good but author has mixed all levels during chapters 100 around. Mc was at gold 5 but even after devouring many pwerful beasts he was still at gold5 but it was clearly said he had gained 10k+ attribute points and then there is wlso Wang Yanren. She is most confusing case, just in one chapter her level was somtimes said to be gold 1 then silver 9 then gold 5, it’s all over the place with no consistency
Honestly, ordinarily this work would be at least 4 stars for me. The attention to detail is fantastic as the author seems to notice the little bits about this type of world and using powers that other authors miss. The writing itself is quite superb with the right mix of adjectives, vivid descriptions and no grammatical errors.The pacing of the world is jarred, we learn about the new world insidiously; slowly and in a measured manner for multiple chapters and then all of a sudden, information is flying our way from nowhere. This works for this novel though because it creates suspense and carries the reader along.The immediate flaw of the work is in character interactions, the characters are three-dimensional but in the author's attempt to make them very complex, they often come across as inconsistent, almost in-human.But the biggest flaw and the main reason for my rating is the MC. He is passive, naive and hopelessly reactive. Unlike other MC's who make things happen and take control, the MC lets things happen and only does something when in a tight spot. As a result, he has somehow ended up being a toy for multiple powerful forces due to his sheer stupidity. He feels very half-hearted without a shred of resolve and thinks and acts like 21st century, first-world **** who has yet to stop suckling at his mother's teat. He makes for an immensely frustrating read and has brought me to the brink of dropping this work multiple times. It is rare for such a good quality work to have one character Fuck it all up but somehow the author has managed to achieve that. And I, as a reader, do not know whether to be impressed at the finesse required to achieve such or angry that such a good book has been made sub par by the individual meant to be its linchpin.
Isnt this just a bad copy of ''Everyone Else is a Returnee'' ?Chinese cultural practices at work I see ..----------------------------------------------------------------------------
I've caught up completely with this book sospeaking as a MMO Gamer, I loved it. I believe you can tell the author's passion from what he's written, and it is clear from this book that he is a fellow gamer and memer. I salute him. His ardor for games is so clearly felt within this book. A fellow gamer can sniff out a fake one like a dead Ugandan knuckles within a Bath and Body Works.This character, Jack, is the true embodiment of an Edgy, intelligent, and gamer we wanna be. I salute you, sir. This book isn't for fools who cannot notice a simple Jojo reference. There are those who probably won't like it. There are those who are gonna feel that there are'needless references', inserted solely for a wink and a nudge from the author to the reader. To those people, I say: SO WHAT? I welcomed those references. It makes me feel good because I know what they are.Is there something wrong with feeling good and getting an innocent giggle out of understanding a reference?How could I hate the references? I love the memes bruh. (For future insights I have seen, for this book is too good for mere casuals) So here's what I liked about this book:1. I liked the main character2. I like the setting the world will take after the game releases.3. I liked the realistic feeling of an online gaming scene Jack is a good kid. He's had a rough life.He's smart but stubborn, with a Lil spice of comedic timing and understanding. He's an malnourished kid too, should've ate more veggies. He probably didn't do too well in school as well lol. He could be any of my friends who play games. It's a caustic world. People have to survive the best way they know how, sometimes those ways are self-destructive. A lot of the problems with these types of fiction is that they're too drastic. Barely years into the future, the world will have created a new society, etc. and admittedly, it is pretty grim, but I still find it believable. I also love Jack's explanation of the way online gaming works, down to its community. He clearly knows his stuff, from user names to avatars. There are some funny tidbits that can be made of his future knowledge. For a comedic novel that should usually lack complexity and would be more of a middle-grade book, Its length and content is driven with the smallest of details which is so commendable, even if this book is a joke, the Author has some serious skill. Breathtaking work! . . . . . . . You thought there would be more BUT IT WAS ME, ADAGIUM ALL ALONG! Attempt 2: You also thought I wouldn't retype it all again so others could see it?! Attempt 3: Bruh please, this platform is gonna give me an arthritis attack bruh. Attempt 4: I better get some sorta compensation for this mutiny.
There is little to no explanation or exploration of World background or even MC's clan or techniques it's not that it's mystery his dad & butler knows it but never told MC.MC is thinks little to nothing logical isn't very attentive to surrounding or happenings main thing for assasin,his character didn't grow much his wife has more development than him, she went from mortal to being more powerful than MC. MC gets thrown to random places comes back boom his wife is more Powerful than before. Even his daughter has more progress than MC in month too.
author have u made changes in the novel,bcoz when i first read it till 1200 chapters a few months back it's different as i am starting to read from the start now