this book is criminally underrated and under popular
The MC is unjustifiably stupid. And his stupidity crosses the boundaries of common sense.
good book , thumbs up to the author . interesting story line , likable characters and very diligent with updating .?
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I think that the story is pretty good so far. The chapters aren’t short, the author is consistent, and it has a really good storyline. The only issue is that there are some minimal grammatical errors. Luckily, it doesn’t take away from the story. Keep up the good work.
Great read with great potential to be a good story, looking forward to more chapters from the author and I hope they keep it up.
______(っ˘̩╭╮˘̩)っ_________.·´¯`(>▂<)´¯`·.__ಥ_ಥ_______________Nice Story___• I just hope that world still have some kind and good people for everyone.• Happy Ending...
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"The beginning was interesting, but Porto, man? When they started saying that the scout was speaking Portuguese, I immediately thought of Brazil. I've never seen a fic that talks about Brazil, even though it's the country of football, and the leagues they compete in are on par with any other. So many football geniuses have played in the Libertadores for Brazilian clubs—it's incredible. Brazil has had five people considered the best in the world, something no other country has achieved, not to mention the other stars who are playing in top European teams and who are still in Brazil at this time. It would have been interesting to see the MC interacting with the future greats."
Amazing imagination. I am afraid that such things could really happen in the future. Who knows. The story is great and you get into it really fast. Great work author ?❤
Hey Author here, Yes i am just gonna just go and shamelessly give it a five star. Well this is my second book my first one was somewhat famous but not gonna lie i gave up on it because i started writing it on a hunch so well this one's more thought after and hopefully is better than my previous book.I hope you enjoy reading it as much as i do writing it.Do give me reviews about what you think.-Author Out
I like it a lot. It was written very well and the author sure has a lot of talent. I don't usually like fantasy, but I enjoyed every chapter and I was unable to stop reading.