So far the novel has great potential. I like how you show their emotions. Both of your novels are great to read...................................................................
Story holds promise and is a fun read so far. It is engaging and the plot is building at a good pace I think he first couple chapters. I look forward to the progression of the story and keep up the good work author. ?
High expectations because of top reviews here but... sigh..For me, its just average, in bad terms, its lame :/I was expecting a somewhat op but not overly op, just strong to stronger genre, cause you know, an ancestor, strongest hero/warrior, first pioneer, blablabla, he even was a somewhat like a soul in the sky watching everything formed, but nothing note-worthy advantage, it was like useless, i dont even know why the author introduced him like that. His personality is cringe for me, i was expecting a somewhat like Overlord vibes, but meh its so far from that.Ofcourse i didnt really read everything, well because its locked starting chapter 40, didn't want to continue cause its boring for me, mostly because already 39 chapters but still didnt hooked me, but maybe, perhaps that later on it'll hit my spot if i continued and everything i questioned so far is explained, but i don't wanna waste coins and pass if im not sure.I rarely leave bad reviews to a novel, i usually support everything because i understood them, especially those novels from originals, but because of too high expectations from the top reviews gave me, i'll be just honest with my review.Well i understand that everyone has different taste, it just disappointed me, first with reviews, and second with what i read from early chapters, i really thought that there will be an Overlord vibes with the way i read it, some famous strong ancestor take over, some benefits and advantages with his state from the beginning, but nothing like that so far, he even struggled at the beginning fighting some mobs(supposedly), in my words, i dont like a grand opening but lame performance.
I've only read for a bit but the story is not very interesting and I think that the amount he gets bullied is just boring now and I really want to see him be good at something
Amazing story and developments, but slow Chapter Release.....I NEED MORE!!!!!!! Tell me how I can help more chapters to be released.....we need more chapters please and thank you.
I am a little disappointed. Normally this would be quite the good novel, but compared to the others in selection, this one is not as good.The story progress is very slow sometimes and at other times weirdly fast. There is no immersion and you can skip chapters without losing anything.I get that the MC is important, but it does not make sense to insert the MC in power fights where he should not be able to do anything, only for him to get temporary boosts to show of.I felt cheated during the graveyard fight. MC is apparently the only thinking individual, while does much stronger are at best a little retarded, even the MC father.Not a good start for a novel which could have potential.
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Extremely Enjoyable and Entertaining.I really like the whole concept of Measurements and Author It's using It's potential to a satisfactory degree.I won't spoil anything but here is a general review:Writing Quality: Really good, Of course this is for a novel in this app but even then I haven't seen a Grammer mistake (low english knowledge as it is my second language).I believe Writing is one of the strongest aspect of this Novel.Story Development: Really good as well.I like the pacing and how the story is progressing, It seems that Author is aware of where he is going with the plot.Character Design: I like this one, I can't give a professional review about this aspect of the story but I, myself really like it.The MC is 3 dimensional and other characters have personality as well.I like that MC isn't the only one with a Past veiled in mystery.Updating Stability: Kinda slow, wish it was faster, but Author hasn't gone back on his word of giving 3 to 4 chapters a week.Still writing Quality can make you overlook the slow updates.World Background: Not sure what to say about this, In one aspect, they are various organisations and cities that have been named and play a important part in the story that I like and I think are cool, In another aspect I still think it could be worked on better because I sometimes get confused when a City is being talked about.The Organisation Are Cool tho, I like them.All in all, Great novel, Sad that this is getting slept on.Better than 99.9 % of stories here.
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It really stands out from the rest of the novels with similar premise. And i like how the author puts effort into making it more realistic and the characters feel real with their own conscience and personality which is missing in most gaming novels. wish there were at least 1 chapters per day. shame.
I love it!