Ikfurr
great story and hope can keep writing it??????????✌️✌️✌️?????????????☠️☠️☠️☠️????????????????u200d❤️u200d??u200d❤️u200d??u200d❤️u200d?
Typical cardboard MC for your middle school readers to self insert in. I can't decide which is worse, cardboard MCs or "righteous" MCs. I guess people voted for this because it sounds similar to another popular novel but look at what we got, Lord Xue Ying didn't die for this.
MTL..
Screw you web novels .com. This was such a great novel. one of my alltime favorites. If not my number 1 favorite. Then you had to come along. Get the translator to use your site. Then end up basicaly droping the story. It's only gotten like 25 chapters in 2 years. web novels kills yet another great novel. Main reason why i no longer suport this site.
It was a good read. Not amazing, just good. ??
Terrible, they hold hands before marriage. That is clearly forbidden in the Qur'an! Only degenerates would read this!I’m kidding, it was good but these comments are GOD tier hilarious!! XD
This is a fun read :vKinda too realistic though :v????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
So I ask everyone to ignore the bad reviews as those have been resolved and should no longer be relevant thank you to everyone who put up with the original version and followed me to the new one hope you all have a blessed day
it's good at first when they're living their life as a novice business personalities while living as a good students as well. IT TASTED BITTER WHEN they have a competition against the amazon and jeff bezos himself. MENTIONING REAL LIFE COMPANY, REAL PERSON, AND PORTRAYED JEFF BEZOS as a petty and horrible character? what is this how Chinese makes their novel? where are the writing etiquettes? where are the codes and conducts of writing? what a bs author!
Good. really not bad. up until now, good story development, characters designs, translation quality, and world building. but i will like faster updates. just can't get enough.more more more...
Still a little early but the story is really fun its also nice to see a non-human protag i hope that this story continues im really looking forward to it
This is a very good story till now. ( Ch12 )The language and grammar could use some work. Author - kun, i recommend that you read the book - 'high school grammar and comprehension by wren and martin'Keep up the good work.
