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The characters and plot are easy to follow, and it is genuinely a great plot. The characters are likable with mysterious personality points to add to the characters' depth. It's definitely worth a read. Not like your usual vampire story, which is very unique.
As of chapter 21: pretty good start. It reminds me of Lord of the Rings like other reviewers have said especially due to the naming in volume 1. Pacing and length seems on track for regular novel length which is a nice change of pace from the typical length of webnovels: appallingly long (which isn’t a bad thing, just hard to get used to). Also volume 1’s ending was pretty surprising! I like the twist. Grammar and writing is pretty good. As for cons: classic case of telling instead of showing; for example in volume 2 instead of saying weird things are happening I want to follow the characters on a day and see them react to the weird things and hear them lampoon ’wow this is getting really old’ and infer myself that this has been becoming a problem before any exposition starts happening… sometimes it feels like I’m reading a summary report rather than a novel. The other thing is in volume 1 everyone repeats the same platitudes every chapter: it will be dangerous but you are not alone… well but a lot of these problems should be resolved as the author gets more writing experience :) enjoying the story.
The story progress nicely. If you enjoy historical fiction, you will enjoy this.
Im Here For The Ride lets See Where This Goes,Shall we
So this is a continuation of the King of chaos.I am looking forward to see how well this story will play out and whether the new mc 'Enry' will become as strong or even stronger than ling xiaolong
This is probably one the better fantasy/survival world Webnovel in these website 4/5 would recommend giving it a try________________________
like jisoo meme: it is good but not that good..for me everythinh good but what i dont like is, this story kind of fast but to slow too.. what make it slow is it was like we reading mc journal.. what time he wake up, how long he's training, how many times he taking a bath..for grammar, well sometime i have a headache reading this.. but i dont care because my english isnt good too.. lol
This story is essentially a Walmart version of Reverend Insanity—with romance. Author, do you think you’re low-key? Do you think readers are foolish? Having the most powerful cultivator be female alone makes you sus. Yet somehow, she finds the MC, a nobody, interesting. She continues to protect him time and time again. Don’t think we don’t see through you, you romance lover. ??Plus, he also cares for his mother. What a villain indeed. ?To all my fellow villain readers: this is a fake villain, and the story will have romance in the future.
Good writing style. Need background. A flow that is good but could be improved. Characters are great tho. Not my really my type of book, but I'd recommend it anyway.
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SLEEP, REST, FORGET, RESET, START AGAIN,
