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A mystery and investigation type novel, it will be my first, I hope you can bring some good elements of mystery in the story and please don't make harem in the end ??
Story has a decent pace so it doesn't feel slow, but the author needs to go back and fix all the inaccuracies with names and genders they change practically every other sentence. For example the MC's name changes three time in one page or something is clearly stated that its a boy then it gets called a girl for half the page only to be called a boy again please fix this so that I can continue reading until then I unfortunately won't be able to continue the book as I'm too tired trying to figure who is who or what instead of focusing on the story.
Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know if yanderes, and if the protagonist really likes girls, doesn't just use... please answer me
My favourite author of all time. I can't wait to see what Lin Lin will be upto. This is exciting ?
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my obligatory 5 star review for historical, kingdombuilding novels here. now I am gonna dive in.................
For the people who like me read the last chapter before the story let me tell you what you should expect in the final chapter. please note that I'm only speaking about what happend in the final chapter and not what led to it.
⚠️Spoilers Alert⚠️
- There is 7 volumes with a total of 4257 episodes.
- The story has been completed (rushed according to some readers).
- Feng Wu and Jun Linyuan will end up together. He decided to give up the throne to go around the world with Feng Wu and told the emperor (who was not his father) that when they'll have a child they would let him succed the throne be it a girl or a boy.
It's good that they FINALLY ended up together but I really wished they would take the throne.
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i actually already reading ir in MTL and its actually pretty good even though the MC is so cautious to the point that i see him as a coward and its also boring sometimes but its still a good read.I like the master-disciple thingy in here so yeah i ebjoyed it and read it if you want a good readI'll rate it 7.5/10By the way here is the title in the mtl"Top-level Air Luck, Quietly Practiced For Thousands of Years"
Sigh.. i wanted to give this one a try due to the good reviews (i didnt look at the comment section yet) So i tried reading a bit and i only read half a chapter and couldn´t bear it to read it anymore. And thats coming from someone thats able to withstand reading mtl´s.The author makes quite alot of mistakes, about 5 in that half chapter.Not only that, i saw that the "protagonist" basicly added a few "!!!" to every sentence of his and his stupid decision at the start so i knew the mental age and eq of the mc and realized that he would annoy me, coming from someone that can live through young master cultivation novels, so i stopped reading this novel.Afterwards i saw the horrible top reviews from this novel and had no idea how this novel has such good reviews..
I really like this novel. First, the power is good, having good potential and longevity. It's a power he can use his entire life. Second, the personality of the MC is fresh. Actually being a second generation rich prince and acting like one. Being rude, arrogant, and taking the host to bed. They all match his personality. Most novels don't do this and their MC's randomly do things that don't match their personalities. Lastly, the plan of the MC to build his foundation, then build his empire during and after this father & son program gives the novel plot area to expand. Unlike those novels about prison escape where there's nothing to expand upon after leaving prison, there are things to do in between and after the program like building the business empire using his fame from the program. This is a good novel and I hope it gets picked.
There are lots of inconsistencies around the MC first of all he is NOT a villian, he is at most antagonist co.kblocking so called protoganist's chance encounters. One chapter he cant kill proto because heavenly punishment next chapter it is because point farming..They nominate him as a supreme leader to powerfull guild with semi random excuse. Even with everything going on if we somewhat accept MC is villian he is at most 3rd rate villian with extreme Reality Bending sistem.OK, All systems are bending reality but I dont want to talk about our MC lotery wins. Read it and you will understand why I mention it in this particular case.
