Okay, first things first, I'm no author nor am I an expert but as a reader, the grammatical errors and poor sentence structure leads to me being unable to picture the scene.Even just a quick run through from a fluent English speaker would significantly help, but I feel that without those errors this story will be an interesting read.Also, I am not sure what the terminology used for this us, but stating who is the current speaker, current POV and seperating different characters' speech.For example, instead of a paragraph looking like:"And that's the plan right" "yeah, perfect"it'd probably be much easier to understand like:John anxiously questioned Bill for the nth time, "And that's the plan right?""Yeah yeah," Bill reassured, "it's perfect."And also at the beginning of each perspective change label who is talking:-----John POV-----
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Probably the best in the current batch of novels. Feels a little dull, but at least it's not a system novel. MC is just straight up omniscient when it comes to any kind of technique. Sword technique, cultivation technique, alchemy technique, you name it. Writing is decent so far, which is the biggest factor for me anyway.
1.the author cant do basic math2.a never ending army3.The mc is dumb4.The others redicule him in the chat which doesnt make any sense because if they redicule him he might not sell foos for gold coins anymore5.Mc is the only smart one here is an example: the game gave them gold coins, so if one thinks logicly gold coins should have a use6.how does he get the corpses of the monsters if the holy light bugs devour them
how do I start this one...Guess I could go with, the story is about a tribe in a possibly alternative version of the past earth (why only possibly is cause we have no idea what life was genuinely like back then, only little tid-bits where understood) during the middle of the stone age. when you look at it from the point of view of a modern life, you see something too out of place. overall 10/10... just needs a bit of refining and a little bit of extra world building, and it will be perfect ?
I have always been a fan of Vampires. And the way you blended it with the setting of one of my favorite anime, AOT, this book, to me, is simply splendid. Keep up the good work!
the best novel I read,every character development is very cool,and overall the omega in this story is really strong,OMG, I love this story really much, author ,you're the best?
I rate my novel low because I know for myself I need a lot of improvements regarding the structure of the sentences. But like that being said I want you guys to support it thanks a lot!
I intended to write similar thing as yours, but you already do it, havent read but im sure is nice!!!! I intended to write similar thing as yours, but you already do it, havent read but im sure is nice!!!!
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Please Stop Staring.It’s weird and kinda annoying.Though I really can’t blame you,After all, I’m too handsome.Why’s it so hard to be ordinary?Why’s it so hard to be low-key?I swear by my life,I really didn’t want to be this good-looking.*siiigh~*
I like the premise so far, and it’s obvious that the author has thought a lot about the world and characters and has planned it out really well. My only critique is that there are a lot of sentences without periods and mission capitalization. It’s still a pretty good story though :)