Her miserable fate

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Sigh.. i wanted to give this one a try due to the good reviews (i didnt look at the comment section yet) So i tried reading a bit and i only read half a chapter and couldn´t bear it to read it anymore. And thats coming from someone thats able to withstand reading mtl´s.The author makes quite alot of mistakes, about 5 in that half chapter.Not only that, i saw that the "protagonist" basicly added a few "!!!" to every sentence of his and his stupid decision at the start so i knew the mental age and eq of the mc and realized that he would annoy me, coming from someone that can live through young master cultivation novels, so i stopped reading this novel.Afterwards i saw the horrible top reviews from this novel and had no idea how this novel has such good reviews..

I have only read 7 chapters and so far it is interesting, but the grammar is too lacking. There are entire paragraphs without a single comma and the sentences can be a bit wonky at times. It makes it unpleasant to read. Other than that the beginning seems fine.

Typical chinese story where problem come after mc to his door even if he stays at home all year around... also its full of young master stuff to the brim... also  its no different from typical stupid mc who just won't backoff even if it means getting in trouble.... and author constantly made powerfull enemy coming after our mc one by one for apparant illogical coincidence which makes mc life always under the crisis.....its preety much very very illogical that how even if mc stay at home all the time 1 level higer villain always keep coming after him.

Good novel like this are getting axxed by qidan while trash novel with romance with subtle rapes and cliche dense mc who makes illogical decisions are still top in power ranking  what a world we live in .

The novel has potential but it's ultimately ruined by the poor translation and the MC. You could put a  bit more effort on the grammar and the MC's character. The story is also quite unique with the MC having all the characteristics almost anyone would hate ???I also don't know if it's because of the translation or not but the naming sense is simply terrible. In short, I hope this novel could do a bit more improvement or it'll just be a big pity.