The other reviews sum it up. Not a bad story but character development and world development constantly and aggressively bogged down by "China is the bestest" to the point it overpowers everything else.
SHAMELESS! Quickly grovel under this Grandfather feets and i might spare you or I'll chop your four limbs and shatter your dantians
This is good for me its a combination of a few novels. But the problem is the grammar and spelling. I dont mind the math cause every novel i read always has problem with numbers in one way or another. Please fix the grammar and spelling find a translator cause reading this novel as it is making me question my sanity
Not gonna lie, the start was pretty rough to get through(the initial first 25 chapters or so) for various reasons like the ranking system (I am a person that is bothered even by small details like this, so this might not have been as bothersome for others), some grammatical errors as I usually read only top-quality novels and the MC's edginess. However as more chapters came out the grammar improved to the point there were only a few errors noticeable in a dozen chapters or so, I stopped being bothered by the ranking system, we got more of the character's background and the MC was not as edgy as before and he actually developed as a character and made believable mistakes and decisions. The only major thing I was bothered overall was how the MC was able to dodge magic spells at the speed of a bullet and the author gave the explanation that he analyzed it and dodged it since he had the skills in the real world too. There was someone who said that even if he is able to do that, his body in the VR world will not be able to keep up with him and the author replied that since it's VR things depend more on his brain's abilities or something like that. I completely disagree with that, because the stats in VR are supposed to limit his body's movement and his agility was his lowest stat (the stats of a player that just started the game). If he could move his body in whatever way he wanted, then what will be the meaning of stats?
Now I will move on to the point I liked the most in the novel - the focus on the 'real' world. I think that the best decision that the author made in the entire novel is to focus on the 'real' world as much as he did on the VR world. The other VR novels I have read are always 95% ( in the very least) VR and 5% (an exaggeration) real world. I commend the author for that.
Overall the novel is worth it if you can endure the first 25 chapters or so.
You have a way with words that make each read worth admiring, you've manage to paint an appealing image for the reader as your words become descriptive the picture becomes clearer. A novel with great potential
Don't be fooled by the 4 &5 stars reviews.
The story is trash, full of plotholes for the sake of plot, 0 proofread, its worse than the usual trial read.
Don't waste your braincells on this.
A lot of errors in this novel, not sure if it’s an issue with the translator or the original author but regardless there are a ton of inconsistencies when it comes to the character attributes obtained or the combat power level. Plenty of other errors as well. Sure you ca. figure out what’s going on but it makes it much less enjoyable to read.
Obrigado pelo capítulo, muito interessante
Writing Quality and Stability of Updates: 5/5 on both, Simply I couldn't ask for anything anything better as the author never fails to deliver us with one chapter every day. The author has a good command over English, certainly not a surprise considering he hails from a natively-english speaking country
Story Development: 5/5, I was a little skeptical at first due to the sypnosis, Kind of just came off as an another local waste rises up to be a phoenix with dragon queen. But glad to say that I was wrong, very wrong. The average aptitude of protagonist is barely ever mentioned in chapters and even if they are mentioned I don't remember any of them being in contempt which is quite a relief. The plot of this story is progressing at a gradual speed, not too fast not too slow, just how I and I imagine a lot of people would like it. Nothing cliche seems to come up yet which is good.
Character design: This is I believe the greatest part about this novel, as every character, starting from the protagonist to the garbage picker has a certain depth of character and each of them seem to posses a rational mind( it pains me to think something so common such as this is rare to find in this CEO-novel filled website ). The protagonist has shown no signs of possessing a moral compass which to me is a plus point but I'd understand if that turns you off from this story. I'm pretty sure he'd only get colder and more sophisticated as he progresses.
Would Background: I have nothing to say about this one as we only know about his sect till yet(not that I am complaining). But referring from how this novel never manages to disappoint me I am certain that the world background as it gets revealed won't be bad.
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This author could write their to-do list and still manage to make it interesting to read. Everything, from characterisation to adjectives implored in this work of art, is magnificent. I cannot praise the writer enough. Marco’s story is heart-wrenching, whole-hearted and full of tears. The characters he meets along his journey to (fingers-crossed) find peace will send you on your own trip to agony land. It is so worth it. Give this book a read and a half - I guarantee you won’t be disappointed.
This is one of the worst novel i read. the wroting quality feels like its written as a fan fic and not even good one at that. Mc was extremely powerful but still acys like a naive kid who doesn't know anything