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it a good novel,which mixes modern word with all the western and eastern fantasy mixed together.the story only starts to develope from 3 rd chapter.
It was better than most of these multiplier novels up until actual battles started happening. Author has this weird idea that adding comedy to a scene where people are being burned to death somehow makes good story. MC is also completely r'tarded, this being part of the brand of "comedy". 23 chapters and then it went from fine to dogsh't within a span of 2 chapters....
Ngl. This one is better than the A Celestial Emperor's Self-Cultivation but in the end a copy is a copy..............................
The story has much potential and I can see it going places. However, I know this story can be of better quality. The story telling could be better and more description would fit this story nicely. I hope you keep up the good work author!
pretty interesting at first but its quality lowers as each chapter passes.. hm
Honestly, I’m coming to dislike this MC more and more. He is cowardly and is constantly flaunting his potential around, sure it’s funny, but all he does is hide and cultivate as if once he becomes immortal he will be invincible. Which I highly doubt because 1. Dude look at the world your in no one dies from disease 2. With no fighting experience your weak no matter your cultivation 3. When you’re immortal I fail to believe you’re undying so other immortals can kill you and lastly he is acting like your typical young master spoiled thinking he need not do anything because he already has everything when he really has nothing, it’s disappointing and I’m disgusted.
This just sounds like immortal swordsman in the reverse world
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well I must say this is a unique story, a dead hunting a living.
but what I noticed emmy is that u write almost like I do when I describe a scene or an appearance.
well everyone should give ur book a chance, even though u locked ur chapters early enough
This sounds really interesting .out of them all,I’m hoping this one gets picked..
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to translator: I hate when I am about to hug someone really sexy and my face hits the mirror.
story: Our language is called the mother tongue because the father never gets a chance to Speak, that Is, very nice
Character: When I joke they take it seriously. When I am serious they take as a joke..
updatig stability: I don't know!
world background: What kind of place is this? It's beautiful: Pigeons fly, women fall from the sky! I'm moving here!
