I just love Culitivation story’ s that the mc is op
This is one of the best books I have read in the genre Fast paced, but without really losing out charater development. The story and world-building are excellent, though world-building is a bit limited for reasons which will become apparent in the story. One of the book’s strength is that it heavily relies on your knowledge of various myths or tropes in order to ‘color in’ the world, but you can easily and blissfully ignore that and just go with the story. The MC is definitely OP, but again, the enemies he has certainly make him work for whatever he accomplishes. Highly recommended :-)
Pretty good, but... you're not consistent. Your description of the main character differs from the psychological portrait of a typical special unit soldier.
I recommend some good literature first.
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pretty good all things considered, a bit of some words that arent PC but oh well, I honestly enjoy the little bit of vulgar speech as being to polite or nice is just a total turn off. I'm enjoying the pacing and would definitely recommend giving it a read. Story is aight but I'm mostly here to see more funny ways this dude can trigger people
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Very good! Author got a good story going on here.
I just hope the MC can lighten up a little over time as he meets more people. I know it should take some time because of his past but some girls or friends should make him change eventually. [img=recommend]
Generic. MC could be replaced by a pokemon and it wouldn't make a difference (like it can launch magic attacks, it has levels and practically just keeps repeating its name) not to mention the boring enemies it finds everywhere it goes. There's a girl in the story, or it could be a Ditto with a female name that's hard to say. The pokemon league must be somewhere in chapter twenty it must be when he starts hitting others before going to another continent to look for more people to hit.
Es una buena novela pero el traductor es muy malo lastima
Es una buena novela pero el traductor es muy malo lastima
Es una buena novela pero el traductor es muy malo lastima
Es una buena novela pero el traductor es muy malo lastima
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The story is interesting and promising. The concept of the story is very detailed. Even the world that the author created is perfectly depicted. Easy to understand, but rich with flavour.
All I can say is that it would be better, I think, if you can use less "he" and change it into something less redundant like "The naked boy," or "the Bloke" or something else. Aside from that, I find it very amazing to see this concept inside a doomsday world.
First of all, the writing style of the author hooked me in the very first page. And I still wonder his lively descriptions that adds more beauty and meaning to the work.