it's pretty good so far it's filled with interesting characters, the main professors that help our protagonist in particular are some of my favorites. Only complaint is the time skips can be jarring I wished they were implemented more naturally instead of jumping straight into the new segment with no acknowledgement. Anyway I hope you keep going strong I need to see our mc rise to the top and get some waifus in the way?
This is a fan fic and yet it is locked at 20 or 21 chapters? What?
Repetitive. Made it about 30 chapters so far and so far what I've figured out is that the villain probably has a mind control ability and is using it to control MC's previous women as well as other allies. That's just what I'm thinking the story will go but NTR isn't my thing especially if I'm going to see it with the ones he's getting close to currently
This is a great novel. Do anyone know where to read this novel online?
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The story is intriguing and the world background is well designed. The story development is smooth. I hope to read many more chapters in the future. Happy writing!
First, this is the most underrated story on webnovel. Second, its not premium. Third, its just amazing. Ill give a TLDR because this will get long.TLDR: Read it. While the pace can be slow in some areas, and there really doesnt seem to be a real threat to the mc at the current time, every chapter is still interesting and fun to read. It keeps you reading, has great quality, and isnt nearly as cliche as most novels.Now for the real review (contains spoilers):Writing Quality - if I could give 4.5 I would, but i couldnt figure out how. it deserves a five over a four though. Great grammar, good structure, varied sentence length, no gender mistakes, nothing. I would give a 4.5 because every now and then a word is spelled wrong or is replaced with a wors that is spelled similarly but has a different meaning. This happens to perhaps one word every 2-3 chapters. The grammar is phenomonal. Update stability - It updates at around the same time day in and day out. I dont mind daily releases because the quality stays consistent and the chapters arent too short.Story Development - Four stars, would have gave 3.5 if I could have. As much as im addicted to the story, its plot is just not something i find...unique? Fresh? Interesting? While the book is not very cliche, the plot is not what I would call revolutionary. Its the typical worlds are merging save the earth story of many video game web novels. Of course, it is done far better than 99 percent of any other story on this site. Also, i never feel a sense of urgency for the mc. Yes, the worlds will merge, yes, humanity is in danger, but the mc will be fine. He grows so quickly that it feels like all problems will just be frozen in ice by his power. I feel nothing for the side characters impending doom because none of the side characters are prevalent enough to make me care. overall the plot just kinda seems like “man goes to VR, Man is OP, man travels around getting more OP, but wait, the big bad is in the background doing....something? Who cares! Fancy armour awaits! All that said, its a general and slightly boring overall plot that is fed to us in a very engaging and interesting way. the plot is not anything great, but its delivery is phenomonal.Character Design - Also a bit flat. The mc is great! He has morals, he has character, he has desires. Everyone else.....Ive read every chapter as it has come out and i can remeber three actual names beyond the generic “mom.” We have Neith, awesome pet spider whose personality i still dont really know. Thalia, stuck out because she was a princess and was a unique character. And King Slayer, only because he is the basically the ***ond in command. Everyone else is just kinda off to the side in “remember if I see them, but dont care about them at all.” While this is due to the mc being alone with Neith most of the time, it not only detracts from the world but also from the plot, as stated earlier. Of course, I love alone time with Adam, its why I read the book, but if im being objective, the lack of character interaction and personality beyond Adam is hurting the story overall.World Development - This is well done. We have gods and stuff in the background we know a bit about, the world has history, it has factions, power struggles, and every nation is unique in its own way. they have thwir own cultures, and the world is well explored through Adams travels. overall, i would say world development is a strong point of the novel.Closing remarks - probably the best book on webnovel. Room for improvement in characters and a bit in plot development (they are linked in this case), but overall, a great story if your looking for something hou wont have to decipher, gives you great fights, and really draws you into the world.
Good.
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The writing in the story could do better but if you comment on the story the auther will reply or like it,so if you ever see a mistake just comment it to help the auther out.The auther updates frequently with chapters.Since the auther works so hard leave a lil comment here and there to help keep the auther motivated! They write two stories so I know they must be overwhelmed at times ?The story development is interesting and I can’t wait to see what else the auther has planned for the book.The charcter design feels a little rushed at some moments but thats just my opion?u200d♀️(You may like how it is so check the book out.)Lastly the world background is thoght out really well I give it a 4.5 ?u200d♀️P.S like I said the auther is really friendly and helps if something confuse you and if you are reading this have a nice day
This novel is good,Concept Was good. But i Have one damn Question why the hell u Give this Good Novel to This Damn Translator to do the rubbish Work. When i reading this book i feeling like i am this book on MTL WEBSITE Or Some Raw Google Translator site. So i humbly Request to Webnovel , Plz Change the translator of this Novel..... I Requesting this as a Fellow Writer and Novel Lover........ So Plz...