Avarge, forced plot... Could be good but i guess autor first book or still young so anyway............................... Cc. Cc. C. Ckxkxkxkxkkxkxkxkxkxkkxkxkxkxk xhjxjxj
Ok let's start by say that this book is a epic read. HANDS DOWN. You need to read this novel. The author has given us an idea of what would happen if master chief from the halo games crash landed on a dungeon and dragons world. And the impact that he has as he goes about survival. Between the hurmous interactions between a born and bred war machine and the world.. You need to read this and beg the author for more'
I love the storyline, I love the characters and I love how he respects his parents and he is an honest young man. I highly recommend that people should read this story. keep up the good work.
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The story is good but some things are getting annoying.The mc sometimes forget information he already knows, especially about the composition of this world ( different continents with different power bases ).I am at chapter 125 and he was suprised at least 4 time about the same information. That there is a magic continent. Even after the dragon confirmed his suspicion. He still got suprised by the dungeons information and also after hearing magic continent from tian tian after becoming a dungeon town owner. The main char is stupid and i sometimes think that the author himself forgets information he already revealed to the MC.As an author, he should be able to follow his own story but i am happy that he never mixed names so fat
