This shameless review gives an idea of what this story is about. I am writing a fan fiction between Gravity Falls, The Gamer, and a few other stories.
I also like mysterious stories. Good going keep it up..... I am eagerly waiting for 3rd chapter. I know it would be interesting. Having fun reading it.
I have already read the full novel, hopefully they will update this one here. My current favorite noel, you will laugh and cry and get angry.. All emotions are present.. Character development was awesome, great male and female lead. Im hoping for a season two of this novel.. Kudos!!! ??
I decided to wait till the 13th chapter before leaving a review...and wow! I'm in love with this novel. I believe this is the best sci-fi novel I've seen in a long time. It is mature, well paced and has solid world building. You can't even guess what is going to happen next. It is unique in how the author tells the story.This would definitely make a great movie some day.
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Honestly great story, the translations were great, and I had a good time reading it. I really liked the ranking system in the story, however currency was a little weird. The main form being bronze, but I also heard gold mentioned so more clarification on currency would be appreciated. all in all great story and I had fun reading it, thank you.
We really enjoyed the story I hope you give us at least 6 chapters before going to seclusion ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????:-(:-(?:-(?:-(:-(?:-(?:-(?:-(??:-(?:-(?............ .. Too much love to the story
The characters are abit...meh could use some more depth. The author English skills could difinitley use some help.The story development is a bit weird,it feels as if the step is jumping from one place to another and i cant catch up with that.The author should have emphasised on the trauma of killing a living being. 15 years old kids aren't professionally hit men. How the gurl acrually planned on killing him was out of this world's logic,but I will attribute to her being attribute sycopath with her friend.Over all attribute an immature story written but a high beginner or lower mid tier author. But it has potential to grow into somehing great so I will follow it for now
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I loved the fantasy-magical theme of the novel the imagination of the writter is wide and Amazing the flow of story was good but there were few Petty mistakes breaking the flaw of the novel like - punctuation mistakes, typography, grammatical errors but if the author works on these things nothing can stop this novel from rocking on. a little cheer up dance for my author best of luck
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Wating for it to countinue Where are those chapters