Character development, ok. World building ok-ish. Grammar, ok. Druid class, more than ok and not the usual swordsman/mage/assassin. Mad Snail = questionable.
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The story had potential but the author pulls the same crap every time, no matter how strong the MC gets, and how many miracle encounters he has, everyone can get stronger than him at the same speed or even faster.Another thing, I'm not a native English speaker but the author's grammar is so bad I had seen MTL novels easier to read.
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