Elita laughed giving a kiss on Night's cheek, " Oh, I love you so much"
Or has she experienced something similar in her childhood?
"Mass Shadow Clone Jutsu!" Naruto called loudly, and the dome was filled with Naruto's again.
I really enjoyed the novel, since its only in the beginning with 5 chapters prior to this review, I can't say much about the story. But I do like the premisse of how things worked. A mysterious book that will shape de MC decisions and its full of question too, which is good for us reader.If you enjoy good descriptions and mysteries, give this novel a try!
good and engaging interesting characters
Okay, here’s my honest review. I’ll start with the title. “Miracles on Mysterious Mars”, sounds kinda interesting. It means that the setting will be in outer space. Next, the synopsis, I like that it’s short, concise, and direct to the point. It also mentioned that it’s in the year 2080, so I expect some futuristic gadgets and other sciency stuff. Lastly, the prologue, or was that chapter 1? I was confused. Also, though the grammar is passable, there were a lot of punctuation misplacements. Also, a piece of advice, instead of using (!!!) and (???) for unnamed characters, it’s better to use (Person A) and (Person B). Anyway, keep it up and keep improving, author!!
Hello everybody. Here, the author. I would like for everybody to read my new book. Critics, as long as constructive, are always appreciated.
author really needs to work on making the narrative more compelling by doing more of showing and less info dumping! though the grammar is impeccable and conversations between characters are well fleshed out, I feel the story could benefit from more character depth, especially from the MC. Ortega seems a bit too basic to me ... overall it's not bad. highly recommend for urban lovers out there
truly a hidden gem, I can feel the potential of this novel, it's still a bit early (only on chapter 120) I hope the author can deliver
Just the right amount of depth to be insanely entertaining. Reminds me of I forcibly kissed the Heroine before my death or I don't want to fall for my master, similar in quality as well
here I am again....rating this book???.. seeing it only has 20 reviews..it's too low, this book deserves more
Maggot! Hard work through honest cultivation is DAO! Magic is just a lousy art of incomplete creations concocted by stupid mortals! Even if U have to sacrifice ur puny life u should start again with cultivation in ur next life, if u ever even deserved to live in the first place (by proving to the dao ofc).