Tears slipped out from the corners of her eyes as she yawned again. Feeling Qiao Feng near her, she turned to look at him, her eyes opened as little as she could manage.
just what i need. a story of samurai in feudal Japan without reincarnation or system trope.
I like this novel but update frequency is very poor.author please update atleast 1 chap in a day
writing quality is a step above a lot of other novels on this app but it still can be improved, for example it is hard to tell weather his thoughts are voiced or spoken internally causing confusion occasionally. not bad. but can be improved the story takes a few common tropes and trys moderately successfully to mesh them together into something coherent. teenager scarring and murdering hundreds of hardened criminals and dieing to be tranmigrated into a game he used to play when he was younger. apparently avidly. the type of game seems reminicent of dating sims where different combinations of interations cause new outcomes in the endings. it also grabbed the trope of unremarkable side character/villan being the one reincarnated as. consequently the characters are 2 dimensional at the start of the story. what you get at first is probably what youll get later on as well.i recommend but the first few chapters are forced and a bit cringe at times.
Pretty standard novel, some humorous places, otherwise entertaining.
I could tell from the synopsis Ihat this was a great book and indeed it is ,can't say I didn't like anything I actually loved each chapter Amazing work indeed keep it up.
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I done reading all the chapters and i have to say that is sooooo gooooood its so relaxing funny and interesting ty author I will be suporting you
Not done, but loving it so far✨✨?, I’m a sucker for romance. I haven’t found the setting yet, but “ president of the company “is giving K-drama and nollywood energy.
It's an interesting story, world, and magic. It's just the absolute lack of grammar, and many sentences make no sense. Also, the pay wall is way too early, especially for the quality and length of the chapters. The characters are decent, but half the time, you can't understand their intentions or emotions because of the poor writing.
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This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?